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Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (24/36)

Mar 22, 2019 12:51

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Explicit Sex, Major Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area ( Read more... )

multi-chap: up in smoke

Comments 4

kei_tea March 22 2019, 19:27:55 UTC

Thank you for your update, I'm so happy! 😍 I've been waiting for it like a child on Christmas Eve 😂
I love it so much 😍
So I'm starting to see the link with your title now 😉
So they have a plan... I hope it will turn out well for all of them, they've already faced so much 💗

ryosukekoibito March 24 2019, 19:28:14 UTC

Thank you for your comment! I know I was late this chapter. I'm going to try to be better about that in the future.

Yes! The connection to the title is starting to come into play. It took me months to name this story, and then once I did I realized that the title wasn't going to make sense for a good portion of it, but...I like it.

They have a plan! I'm so glad you know about the plan now. I've felt like I had a secret or something for a long time because no one knew about the plan. But now it's out and I feel better~ As for how well it will turn out...you'll just have to wait and see!!!

gothunia March 24 2019, 22:57:44 UTC

I know all to well about limited reception right now. It isn't until Thursday that my university in Tokyo will help me get a sim-card.
But omg what a plan they came up with.... I can understand after everything they went through, but I have this uneasy feeling it won't go as we all would like....
It is so touching that Hikaru waits until after their anniversary, I just wish them a happy little get away on that day! They deserve it!

ryosukekoibito March 29 2019, 04:00:18 UTC

It can be hard, not having good reception. I hope you got your sim-card! When I was in Tokyo I didn't have cell service while I was there, so I just relied on wifi. It can be a challenge.
It's quite the plan, isn't it? They're pushing for the end, for any end. You'll have to wait and see if it goes to plan or not!
I love that little moment at the end of the chapter. Hikaru is still thinking about Keito and their relationship, despite all of the other things going on.