Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (28/36)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Explicit Sex, Major Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area

Comments

[kei_tea]

I have so much to say about all this but I guess all I manage to express is going to be "I love it" 😭😭😭
Keito almost made me cry, I mean please please please let them be happy after all this.... the boys have been through so much they all deserve peace now 🤧
The more it's going on, the more I'm afraid of the ending...
I got scared of the attack hopefully it was just a small one.
I hope Yabu will wake up, Hikaru needs him just like Keito needs Yuto...
BUT MY WHAT'S WITH ALL THAT SUSPENSE! I just can't wait to read the rest of it, I just hope my heart will stay in one piece ☹️

Anyway, enough with my babbling, good job as always, and again, I LOVE it and you're doing a great job and you can be proud of you 😘😘😘

[ryosukekoibito]

I'm glad you liked this chapter!
They have all been through a lot. It's been a rough few months on everyone.
There's only a few chapters left! I'm excited and a little nervous for you to find out how it ends.

You're always so sweet! Thank you for commenting! Your enthusiasm is really uplifting.

xoxo

[kei_tea]

The truth is, the more it goes, the more I'm actually afraid to read the end... I wish for a happy ending for the boys, but at the same time, I'm also expecting something awful... And to be honest, it kind of "upset" me, I can't really find the right word to describe how I feel about this. Anyway, I'll support you regardless of what choice you made, because it's "your baby", this whole story and universe ;)

[gothunia]

I am not ready for what is about to happen... I want to read it, but I am not ready!
This chapter was so sweet!!!! The contrast between the fierce, aggressive, unrelenting yakuza and the sweet, gentle, somewhat corny lover in both of them is so amazing to see.
Thank god the fight wasn't as bad as it first sounded. I understand why Keito said what he said to Inoo and why Inoo was mad, we all do and Inoo will understand as well.
I am still not ready for the battle to come... However I do believe that Keito will be able to protect Hikaru, that is why he voluntered to join right? If my memory serves me correctly😅 they will be fine! You hear me! They will be just a okay!

[ryosukekoibito]

I've got the jitters thinking about finally posting the next few chapters! I want to show you but I'm also not ready.
I like the duality of the kumi boys. I'm glad you noticed it. I don't want them to be one dimensional. Everyone has complexities and isn't the same person all the time, and I am so glad you could see the differences in them.
You sound a little like you're trying to convince yourself that it's all gonna be alright. It's cute. As for if you're right, you'll just have to wait and see!