Up in Smoke: A Heisei Kumi fanfic (29/36)

[ryosukekoibito]

Author: ryosukekoibito
Pairing: Hikato, Chiitaro, Ariyama
Rating: R/NC-17
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Minor Character Death, Strong Language, Explicit Sex, Major Character Death
Genre: Slice of life/Angst
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone.
Summary: After months of peace an attack leaves the Heisei Kumi reeling, and when an old enemy returns to the area

Comments

[kei_tea]

This is.... I don't know, I don't know what to say. I just hope everything goes according to their plan, but the fact that the others aren't coming back.... I hope everyone is ok 😭
Thank you for your hard work ❤️ I'll wait for next Friday to read the next chapter 😱
😘

[ryosukekoibito]

Thank you so much for your comment!❤️ I know it was rather suspenseful this week. Hopefully it was worth the wait.

[gothunia]

God damn the suspence is killing me! Where are they? I am literary speechless...
I am head I am saying they will be fine, just a littlr trouble maybe, but nothing major... Yes I am trying to convince myself, because I don't want want the other option.
The title of this part of the series makes complete sense now that I think about it... But it can also figuretively, like a future or dream gone up in smoke....
Damn I can't wait for the next chapter!

[ryosukekoibito]

Yeah it was a bit of a cliffhanger this chapter. Hopefully the next chapter met your expectations!
Yes! The title finally gains context in this chapter! You totally nailed it, both literally and figuratively 'up in smoke' as it were.
Thank you so much for your comment darling! I always look forward to hearing what you think!

[butterfly5286]

Its heartbreaking to see how sweet a very dark day starts. You can really tell how despite them having made up their minds and having drafted a plan, they still feel the weight of such decision. And I can't imagine how hard it is for Inoo and Yuto to just stay back while the others are at the enemy's territory. its crazy that they actually are carrying on with the plan, it sounds like a situation that is gonna leave a deep mark in all of them, I don't think they'll be the same after that. OMG OMG please that the others are ok, let them be safe!!

How are you doing?? How is life going??

I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story!! I seriously can't wait.

[ryosukekoibito]

The morning is a moment of tenderness before the darkness of the massacre. It was a very human moment before something really cruel and horrific. Inoo and Yuto I think might almost have the worst part of it, because they can't help their family, no matter how badly they want to. The plan is really crazy. I don't think anyone could go through that and stay the same.

I'm okay! I'm starting a new job on monday, so I've been busy with that, and we've had some family business that has taken up a lot of time and energy recently.

How have you been babe? I haven't been on the internet much recently, so I'm rather out of the loop.

If you want to chat I'm always open to it! I love talking with you! ❤️