Consent

[rytings]

When Baralai found out that Gippal was sixteen years old, he panicked.

“Are you certain?” he asked Nooj in a hushed voice while Gippal was away hunting for their dinner in the Bikanel sands.

“Yes,” Nooj said. “He’s been lying to us this whole time.”

“What is he doing in the Crimson Squad then? He shouldn’t even be here.”

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Comments

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[kunstarniki]

This is beautifully conceived and carried through. I have the feeling I have been waiting for you to cover this subject since the recent unpleasantness. You have dealt with the problem openly and fearlessly. Bravo for you!

I cannot remember a story in which you have more precisely depicted the lads and given each his own voice. You have made me half in love with Gippal myself. ;)

[tikkuy]

-sigh- Why do video game characters have to be such a tease? The age has never been too much of a problem for me, although I always see Baralai as a very worrying person, so it fits, really. Congratulations on yet another well written story!