The ending was my favorite part of this story. ♥ I'm actually glad it wasn't translated because then there was some suspense as I went to an Al Bhed translator and was like :o It wasn't what I was suspecting him to say at all - I thought he would say something about his eye or mutter something about what Baralai said. But somehow, what he said is perfect for this story and I can't imagine it any other way now.
Baralai's and Paine's behind-the-scenes scheming (if it can be called that?) to figure out the truth behind Gippal's eye is kind of hilarious. I loved this: “Wake up, Baralai. You can stop your performance and, for Ixion’s sake, pull on some pants, you’re disgusting.” Poor Baralai. I can't blame him for being shocked. I mean, Baralai buttocks are one of the least disgusting things I can think of.
I really like the tone of this and the way the story's laid-out. The only thing I wish was different was this: Soon enough, Baralai too was naked I'd like to see the undressing for completely legitimate reasons, I think. XD Non-sexual
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Baralai's and Paine's behind-the-scenes scheming (if it can be called that?) to figure out the truth behind Gippal's eye is kind of hilarious. I loved this: “Wake up, Baralai. You can stop your performance and, for Ixion’s sake, pull on some pants, you’re disgusting.” Poor Baralai. I can't blame him for being shocked. I mean, Baralai buttocks are one of the least disgusting things I can think of.
I really like the tone of this and the way the story's laid-out. The only thing I wish was different was this: Soon enough, Baralai too was naked I'd like to see the undressing for completely legitimate reasons, I think. XD Non-sexual ( ... )
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