Star-Crossed [Chapter 1]

[ryudell]

Title: Star-Crossed
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Disclaimer: Eyeshield 21 and Darker Than Black belong to their respective creators.
Warning: An AU borrowing the Darker Than Black premise. Warning for language and violence.
Summary: Introduction of Sena, Mamori and the concept of 'natural' Contractors.
Author's Note: Natural Contractors do not exist in

Comments

[darkbluechocie]

This is good..Although im a bit confused by the other characters from Darker Than Black...
maybe you should introduce the characters a bit so it wont be confusing ne...

*claps*claps*

job well done ^-^

[ryudell]

None. There are no characters from DtB. Aside from ES21 characters, the rest are all OC to avoid any crossover ^_^

[windam2611]

nice.. but i still confuse in character and the situation. i think i will watch DtB. but it still nice...
is in the next chapter have some hirumamo?

Gokurosama...

[darkbluechocie]

oow...I see..that explains ^-^

good luck on this

[cherry_tiger]

Oooh... I love how you're using the concept in darker than Black and slowly turning it into something of your own. I love that idea of "passive" contractors, it just makes things more interesting. Gosh, I am so looking forward to this story! Keep it up! ^^

[ryudell]

I love DtB and am really sad that it's over. I love Mao T_T so I hope this will keep my love for DtB burning!

[cherry_tiger]

I intend to rewatch the series. It's just such an awesome anime! ^^ And yes, may this fic keep your love for DtB ever strong!!! ^^