Eyeshield 21- Star Crossed (Chapter 2)

[ryudell]

Title: Star-Crossed [Chapter 2]
Fandom: Eyeshield 21
Warning: Borrowing the premise from Darker Than Black.
Disclaimer: Eyeshield 21 and Darker Than Black belongs to their respective creators.
Summary: An introduction on the Devil.
Author's Note: I had a slight problem with this chapter, but I think this will do.

Comments

[cherry_tiger]

I can see why you had a problem with this. It felt a little confusing in the beginning but I managed to catch up and understand. Whoo~! Getting the Ha-Ha brothers involved is interesting, and I should've known you'd make Cerberus talk! Freaking awesome! I can't wait to see where this is going! ^^

[ryudell]

I have the storyline planned until the near ending. It's going to be rather long, but otherwise I've gotten all the terminology and concept out of the way - and like the original series, I'm going to cheat and not explain the origins of the Dolls :p

[cherry_tiger]

Lol!!! I have a feeling this is going to be really awesome. ^^ And yeah, the Dolls... Lol!!! Gosh, I miss Darker than Black and reading all this makes me want to watch it again! XD

[ryudell]

Go ahead! Fangirl over Glutton!Hei all over again, heehee!

[24_paperwhites]

This comment is late MAX! but I was just wondering if you're planning to continue with this story. It's really interesting!
I found your stories through the hirumamo and I loved your 100days. Thank you for all your hard work so far, I look forward to more!

[ryudell]

*chuckles* to be honest, this is a piece that I love dearly, but am having a hard time writing (due to the complexity of Darker Than Black, I'm trying to water it down in this AU) however it is NOT on hiatus... just extremely slow. Thank you for dropping by and taking time to read it, it's greatly appreciated!