Comments | ryunuka: Oneshot - You Can Come Back Now

ryunuka

Oneshot - You Can Come Back Now

May 01, 2009 10:38

Title: You Can Come Back Now
Pairing: Ueda/Guess
Rating: PG
Genre: General
Summary: The garden of the heart he sang about in Ai no Hana turned out to be more real and more important than anyone could have thought.

( Lying on the grass, staring up at the sky... )

genre: general, pairing: ryoda, oneshot

Comments 18

pleu16 May 1 2009, 14:01:56 UTC

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow.

ryunuka May 1 2009, 14:06:05 UTC

lol
glad you liked it ^_^
Thanks for reading and commenting~!

isodia May 1 2009, 16:04:18 UTC

WOW! Just wonderful.. very different and yet beautifully written once again

You managed to show different aspects of Tatsuya and the garden! I love it so much! The symbolism and importance of it and every flower, tree, etc...
♥ ♥ ♥

I really like this a lot! I can't explain how much but this is just really wonderful! ^_^

Great job! :D

ryunuka May 1 2009, 16:59:44 UTC

Yay, glad you like! And I'm glad you got what I was going for ^_^
Thank you lots~!

snow_meow May 1 2009, 16:59:19 UTC

This one of the unusual and interesting fics for RyoDa.

It's interesting to read Ueda's POV and him seeing his different selves and his "garden"

ryunuka May 1 2009, 17:01:15 UTC

Unusual is my middle name...ok no it's not, but wouldn't it be cool if it was :P

Thanks for reading and commenting~!

meilinsnape May 1 2009, 21:37:36 UTC

~,~ omg.. when i started reading that he didn't know where he was and he neither remembered where he was before... I kinda started panicking.. i was like 'damn! is he dead??' -,-U

It was so cool to read the whole garden explanation, I could almost imagine it with all the Tat-chan's walking there [more than one Tat-chan? now that's a paradise to me...XD]

aww back to 'reality'...Ryo with his "stay with me!" I was like 'don't you frikkin dare to leave him Ueda!!' hehehe I think i was a little bit too into the story ^,^U

love the ending!!"I don’t want to move on from you, I want your flowers to keep growing" sniff..I feel like crying but my mom would make a lot of questions so i'll just smile like crazy ^---^

Kisses!!!
p.s. a little bit waaaaay too long this comment ne~?

ryunuka May 2 2009, 06:21:45 UTC

lol so you liked it then? :P
I'm glad you liked my explanation of his garden, I felt a bit like I was just assuming too much when I was writing it, so I'm glad it's ok.
I think I was feeling Ryo's panic a bit when he was saying 'stay with me', and yeah, that's supposed have two meanings in a way, but Ryo doesn't realise it at the time.
Please don't cry! O.O -hands you tissues just in caes-
And no the comment isn't too long, I like long comments, they're good feedback ^_^
Thank you lots~! -gives you cookies-