Oneshot - 夏の夕日

[ryunuka]

Title: Natsu no Yuuhi
Pairing: MaruDa
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG
Summary: What if I said it would never be as beautiful as you?

Comments

[sashjun]

this really really was fluffy, now I want to watch sunset, but the sun has set allready, damn it!
Thanks for writing this ...

[ryunuka]

lol Glad you liked it ^_^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~!

[sashjun]

no problem btw are you planing to repost the fic from pinc pajama chalenge? Because I love it very much and I was planning on flailing about it on your journal but you never posted it!

[ryunuka]

Oh yeah, I forgot about that!
I'll probably post it at some point soon, I'm getting so forgetful recently :P Thanks for reminding me ^_^

[sono_kiseki]

same for this! DX

THIS SPOT IS MINE.

[sono_kiseki]

♥♥♥ Ryunuka-chan-senpai, all the fluff's killing me XDD It's awesome, awesome~~~

(a word of crit :

“Almost six, the sun will go down soon, we should head back,” in response, instead of getting up or even opening his eyes Ueda shifted closer...

I don't know. The phrasing bothered me. XD I would put a comma between 'eyes' and 'Ueda')

But you're still so much love. XDD

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[ryunuka]

Probably should put a comma in there, thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix it at some pont ^_^
Really glad you liked it, thanks lots for reading and commenting Kellie-chan~!

[xoxhitomi]

This is was so pretty! Loved it!

[ryunuka]

Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[grashiya01]

fluff<3

love the way the scenery and tatchan was described.. it's like i'm really seeing things from maru's view..

well, can't blame maru.. hime is indeed breath-takingly beautiful.. :)

THANKS FOR SHARING THE LOVE~~

[ryunuka]

I'm really glad you liked it, thanks lots and lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[ryunuka]

Yay~ glad you liked it ^_^
Thanks lots for reading and commnting~!