Oneshot - 冬の涙

Aug 13, 2009 18:50


Title: Fuyu no Namida
Pairing: RyoDa
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Warning: Death
Summary: Look...winter is crying for you...

fuyu no namida... )

pairing: ryoda, oneshot, genre: angst

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creamy_amande August 17 2009, 21:51:27 UTC
finally he's crying.
That means Ryo died a year ago.
Ah~ I don't like chara death so much but this one, first it's you, second you didn't focus on the death but more on the afterdeath, and the mourn. And I would have cried buckets if you had written the death itself, the happening and all around it. But you didn't, so it's good, since I don't wanna cry right now, only being teary a little.
We don't know how he died but that's not the point here.
AH, "winter is crying for you Ryo", so nice ending and beautiful phrase.
Thank you!
I'm happy I finally read those seasons!

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ryunuka August 24 2009, 08:23:08 UTC
I don't usually like character death either, I usually avoid it whether I'm reading or writing, but somehow this fic wouldn't have worked the same if he wasn't dead :(
I'm glad it didn't make you cry though!
I'm really glad you liked it, especially the ending, thank you lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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fancyann1974 October 21 2010, 12:29:51 UTC
so sad, touching, and lovely
thank you so much for sharing

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ryunuka October 23 2010, 21:36:39 UTC
Glad you liked it, even though it was sad, thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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