Strive for Something Better Ch12 ~Finale~

Aug 23, 2009 21:09

And thus this multichap comes to an end! And thankfully it didn't take me another month to post it this time XD

There's still something I need to tell you... )

pairing: ryoda, multichap: strive for something better, genre: drama, genre: angst

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Re: (L) it ryunuka August 24 2009, 08:54:47 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it, thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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sono_kiseki August 23 2009, 21:18:43 UTC
THIS SPOT MINE.

Darn it not first.

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sono_kiseki August 23 2009, 21:29:41 UTC
This time I was totally enjoying the flow of the story, and only caught something that could only be a typo-typed-too-fast :

realised…2 he trailed off, unsure as to how to continue.

2? XD"

OKAY RED CARPET GOING ON. *bricked*

Wheeee! Great job, ryunuka-chan-senpai! XD" btw, what else can I call you, this is getting way lengthy ._." You kept this story waaaay interesting throughout all the twelve chapters! :3 The finale made me awwwwwwwwwwww~ so bad. XD" Good job, I say!

FOR THIS YOU DESERVE A UEDA!PLUSHIE AND BADASS COLOURFUL HEARTS. :D

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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ryunuka August 24 2009, 08:56:56 UTC
Thanks for pointing that one out, I fixed it now :P
Really glad you liked it all :)
And you can call me whatever you like, anything's fine by me ^_^
O.O Yay~ Ueda!plushie XD
AND badass hearts! Thank you Kellie-chan~! ^_^

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ichigohime August 23 2009, 21:53:38 UTC
I loved this fic! Thank you so much for writing it.
And the lovely romantic ending is perfect!

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ryunuka August 24 2009, 09:01:21 UTC
Yays~ Glad you liked it, especially the ending ^_^
Thank you lotsfor reading and commenting~!

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sashjun August 23 2009, 22:14:05 UTC
aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh I held my breath the entire time, such a nice thing to come home to ...it had several nice moments, but this sentence strikes me the most ... the longing in it ...
Fold his fingers around Ueda’s, twine them together, brush his thumb across the back of Ueda’s hand, over the raised veins there, their pulses throbbing through each other’s skin…

Anyway thank you for finishing this:)

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ryunuka August 24 2009, 09:03:35 UTC
^_^
Reeeeeally glad you liked it~!
I'm glad I managed to finish it around the time I said I would :P
Thanks lots and lots for reading and commenting~!

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chococrisp August 23 2009, 22:43:17 UTC
Kyaa ! This is so sweet ! I like it, especially when ryo hug tatsuya when ryo save him . Anyway, do you mind to write a sequel ? Because this fic is to sweet and lovely to just stop in the end . But i'm not force you to, ne ! Thx ! ^^

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ryunuka August 24 2009, 09:04:33 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it, but I don't think there'll be a sequel, sorry, I'll think about it though ^_^
Thank you lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

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