Whisper in the Darkness Ch11

[ryunuka]

WHISPER IN THE DARKNESS - CHAPTER ELEVEN

“Ryo?”

He wanted to ignore the fact that it was now the second time saying his name and there had been no response. Was he messing around with him? He knew by now how keen Ueda’s sense of hearing was, surely he’d expect him to know whether or not someone had entered the room. So why was he keeping quiet

Comments

[sono_kiseki]

Hello it's me!!' I read it through but I'm kinda half asleep so I'll gove you a better comment when I wake. ♥

[ryunuka]

Yikes that was fast :P
Sweet dreams Kellie-chan~! ^_^

[lil_brooke]

oh no..whats gonna happen now??
awww poor tacchan.. *hugs him tight*
i wish everything will turn out ok..
and who was that junior?? i dont have the slightest idea who.. hmmm... *ponders on it*
hehe thanks 4 the update! :D

[ryunuka]

I don't want to give it away or anything, but the guilty junior was in the previous chapter. :P
I know how the next chapter should pan out, so hopefully I can get it written soon...or at least before 2011 lol.
Thanks lots for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[sashjun]

You know I like your writing a lot but just ... I know it´s hard not to analyze the characters and you want this to be perfect and great and it´s still good and all but I find myself wanting to skip over the long trips into Ueda´s head and thoughts. You are doing a pretty good job in getting his feelings across by the atmosphere of the story, by his gestures and stuff ... so basically the story is starting to feel a little slow at this point

[ryunuka]

Don't be sorry, I actually couldn't be more appreciative, you might be right.

I love writing and I always want to it to be good, because I'm serious about it, but maybe I get too serious.
Plus, I'm prone to comparing myself to other writers...and I read a LOT (not just fics lol :P).

Thanks a lot for your advice, I think you're probably right, so I'll try and...not try, lol. Obviously I was doing something right before the last few chapters, so hopefully I can do it again ^_^

And seriously, don't be sorry, it was plenty constructive, and really helpful, and I'm really glad you still like my stories, even though they've been off recently.

Thanks again~! ^_^

[meilinsnape]

Holy frikkin'...sh...damn...
...& there I thought everything was going to get fixed ¬n¬

I soooo hate Kitayama & Fujigaya right now... as much as I hate Ryo's managers![ok, I'm no hating the managers,I'm just pissed at them so much!!!, but I DO hate those kizumais right now!]

*facepalms*
oh why!? what a frikkin' timing! why must Ryo go back to Osaka at a time like this!??

T~T Tacchan...gambatte...& I'll stop hating people XD

Hope to read you soon!

Kisses&Hugs!!

p.s. have a nice 'back2school'! xD

[ryunuka]

I hope I can update again soon, but university is a lot busier this year -_-
Plus, I want to make the next chapter good, the last few haven't gone too well, and I want to get the next one right.
Thanks a lot r reading and commenting~! ^_^

[pilipinagrl]

this was awesome!! i am always way too excited whenever you post another chapter of this story ^^
i love it, as always. that junior needs to go and ueda needs to figure out that ryo is just hopelessly in love with him soon.
i cant wait till you update again!!!

[ryunuka]

Glad you're liking it, hopefully I'll update before I graduate XP
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting~! ^_^