Comments | s0methingp0etic: New one-shot! :)

s0methingp0etic

New one-shot! :)

Oct 04, 2007 03:41

A one-shot just starting pouring out of me tonight and I finished it and had it beta'd stat and so, here it is!

A thousand appreciative shout-outs to my beta
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new one-shot!, squee!, new layout

Comments 11

heathenrespite October 4 2007, 17:08:09 UTC

Awwwwwwww....! *is all mushy* That was perfect love! I really like the angsty tones in the beginning and how they changed to something more hopeful and sweet. It's amazingly written, especially their characteristics and the split-point perspectives were spot on! Definitely one of my favourite one-shots so far! I love it, excellent job!

s0methingp0etic October 5 2007, 02:26:47 UTC

Yay! You liked it!! :D
Man, if it's one of your favourites so far I am seriously honored!! :D
*squeeeee*

isupportseverus October 4 2007, 22:20:37 UTC

That's really good for just coming out all at once. Love the thing how Draco always thinks Hermione's avoiding his gaze cause she hates him and vice versa. Ineresting and introspective. With two F-bombs. Heh heh. F-bomb are funny.

s0methingp0etic October 5 2007, 02:27:57 UTC

Thanks! :D
I'm all about the F-Bombs. lol.
I dunno, to me Draco just seems like he would cuss naturally. :)

isupportseverus October 4 2007, 22:21:03 UTC

Oh yeah, I sent you my story, goddammit, so get going! Ha.

s0methingp0etic October 5 2007, 02:28:37 UTC

I know! I got it! Im about 20 pages in...
It's SOO HARD not to skip ahead to THE scene...
LOL

isupportseverus October 5 2007, 18:22:16 UTC

Ah yes, but then when you get to it it will be just so much more awesome cause of all of the BUILD UP! Like you know, when you do it for real after like a year of NOT DOING IT (God I hate the Army...)!!

F-bomb are the bomb. They make me laugh. I'm going to use one...yes, only one...but the fact that there is only ONE will make it all the more PROFOUND!

ftsor October 4 2007, 22:21:54 UTC

BWAHAHA I told you!!! :D

Love the new layout, by the way. That is suuuch a pretty song.

And I don't know about New Jersey being gross; all I know is that it's small and I've never been there. Rhode Island is pretty nice, though. Very yuppie and in close quarters with MA. Oh yeah, don't New Jersey people have those horrible accents?

s0methingp0etic October 5 2007, 02:29:58 UTC

Yay! Thanks again for going over it for me.

And yeah dude...I was actually listening to the song last night when I foung the layout, and I am writting a story based on it, so I was like, OOOO!

Too bad Jersey's so far away. :/

nezbabe October 4 2007, 22:59:36 UTC

That is very well-written. One of these days I'll have to watch those movies. :P

s0methingp0etic October 5 2007, 02:30:36 UTC

Yeah you do! Jeez louise! :)