Dreams for Plans part 5

Jun 06, 2010 11:06


‘You did a very good job with Arthur today’

‘Thank you My Lady’

‘Would you mind giving him a few more lessons before the feast?’

‘I am afraid I am rushed off my feet at the moment, besides I think he has the basics sorted so he shouldn’t tread on your feet anymore’ she smiled.

‘You couldn’t spare half an hour?’

‘I’m very sorry but I really ( Read more... )

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reseda_3067 June 6 2010, 20:01:39 UTC
This was so sweet and adorable. I love the fact that Morgana is totally oblivious to the truth. lol!

Love it!

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s11235 June 6 2010, 22:23:59 UTC
Thanks so much, glad you are still enjoying it :D

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ella_rose88 June 7 2010, 05:05:00 UTC
OMG I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter so much.

I love the balance you have with Merlin/ Gwen interactions, Arthur/ Merlin interactions. But I really liked the conversation between Morgana and Arthur (I like the sibling relatio0nship you have developed here). I also love the fact that Merlin is helping Morgana yet he won't tell her that A/G already have feelings for each other. I'm half tempted to tell Morgana myself- but waiting to see when she does will be better.

Finally I loved the conversation between A/G! It was well needed and I can understand why Gwen would be honest and say that she won't make a promise unless somethings happens. Also loved Gwen's reaction to the fact that Arthur had thought about their future.

Can't wait for the next installment!

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s11235 June 7 2010, 07:54:21 UTC
Thank you so much!
Glad you liked the brother/sister relationship between Morgana and Arthur, I just wish they'd had some more interaction during the second series, Morgana just ended up getting sidelined a lot of the time.
And glad you liked the A/G stuff, I felt it about time that they have a direct conversation
Thanks again for your lovely comment :D

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ella_rose88 June 7 2010, 08:01:09 UTC
Glad you liked the brother/sister relationship between Morgana and Arthur, I just wish they'd had some more interaction during the second series, Morgana just ended up getting sidelined a lot of the time.
I agree. I never liked them romantically together, but I think their brother/sisterly scenes were very funny and you are right. It's unfortunate that Morgana (and in most cases Gwen too) get sidelined by the boys. It's time that Capps and Co. listened and actually gave them more screentime and excellent storylines.
And glad you liked the A/G stuff, I felt it about time that they have a direct conversation
Yes I really did enjoy it and I hope we get a scene like this on the show eventually.

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s11235 June 7 2010, 08:33:33 UTC
Yeah I was never a fan of Arthur/Morgana in a romantic sense, tbh most of the time I didn't really see it at all because I think given the set up, she's been brought up as his sister, I wasn't really looking for it and when I did look for it I just found it rather creepy personally.
And I totally agree with giving the girls their own storylines and more screentime- though it sounds like that should improve, at least a bit, in s3. Gwen at least had an improvement in screen time between s1 and s2, coz I swear Angel Coulby spent the vast majority of s1 arranging flowers or standing on the side somewhere- what a waste. But in s2, if it wasn't the Morgana's magic storyline, Morgana barely featured at all and her relationships with most of the other characters just seemed to spontaneously combust- again what a waste.

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ne_rien June 7 2010, 05:22:35 UTC
Methinks that Morgana starting to figure things out = trouble, lol. The A/G in this chapter was so sweet (I love that Arthur cares enough to research, lol)! And I really loved the Merlin/Gwen moments (they're such cute BFFs ♥). Brilliant update!

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s11235 June 7 2010, 08:34:55 UTC
Thanks very much! And yes Merlin and Gwen are very cute BFFs :D

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jjazz59 June 7 2010, 18:22:57 UTC
This was just fabulous. Morgana totally misreading the situation and then running to Merlin was quite funny. Both Arthur and Gwen barely holding in their happiness. Merlin is so excited and doesn't hesitate in expressing it. I just adored the whole chapter!

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s11235 June 7 2010, 20:57:04 UTC
Thank you so much!!! So glad you are enjoying this, it has been a lot of fun to write. Merlin is very enthusiastic in his shipping in this fic, it was just too tempting :P

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saurina June 7 2010, 19:30:00 UTC
Owww poor Morgana, she's so hell bend on helping, that she don't see, what's really are going on between A/G, but it's so much fun watching her try LOL!

And Arthur and Gwen finally had the talk - YES! You are my hero, you've managed to actually get these crazy in love kids to talk about how they are feeling. If it was up to me, you should write for the show on a regular basis!

Also yay to Morganas reaction, when Leon asked her out - funnii..:D

Great work bb, can't wait for the next installment. ♥

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s11235 June 7 2010, 21:06:01 UTC
Lol, glad you are still enjoying her misguided endeavours, bless her.

Yes I felt 'the talk' was well overdue. I do love the angstiness of these two but seriously would it kill them to have a direct conversation for once. Even the ep 10 serious talk didn't actually achieve anything, no one said exactly what they were feeling. It's infuriating to watch, but kinda cute too.

Morgana and Leon- it would have been so cute, unfortunately morgana getting her evil on will throw that out of the proverbial window.

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, you are way too good to me, and I will try not to keep you waiting too long :D

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saurina June 7 2010, 21:18:57 UTC
I do love the angstiness of these two but seriously would it kill them to have a direct conversation for once. Even the ep 10 serious talk didn't actually achieve anything, no one said exactly what they were feeling. It's infuriating to watch, but kinda cute too.

YES exactly bb, I couldn't agree more!

And you're right, Leon and Morgana is a missed opportunity if there ever was one, but then it's good that we have fanfiction, where anything can happen lol!

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