Somebody

[s70t5driver]

Welcome to my mind. This dark place has only one equal: the horizon on a cloudy night. I am the moon on a distant side of the universe, trying feebly to catch the rays the sun (or the girl I love) throws out to all that exists. I lay on the beach, watching the sun throw its dying rays upon the shimmering water. The pinkish hues slowly recede

Comments

[_mother_nature_]

wow that was a good poem!!! i cant write 2 lines that rhmym! lol.
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montana

Re: a few tips

[_mother_nature_]

wow, honestly that was rude. just shut-up if your gunna take your time to critque HIS poem, thats what he thought up not you...
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montana

Re: a few tips

[_mother_nature_]

i dont care if you dont like him theres no reason to write in his LJ and be rude... you dont like him so dont write in it why would it matter...
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montana

[cutelilfox]

hey mr.adam! who ya talking about! thats so sweet!

[s70t5driver]

thanks lydia, lol. some questions must go unanswered

[sitinonthebeach]

very beautiful...

[s70t5driver]

thanks reesa. we still have to get together some time, love. before we have to compete against each other! lol. talk to you later. IM me sometime!

[sitinonthebeach]

oh you know I dont Im people!!well I better see you at my play next week!!

[s70t5driver]

hmm, are you performing at each showing? cuz I can't go on friday night (dad) and saturday night I'm going to a bday party. I can go to the 2PM showing on sat though if dad lets me and def. on sunday I can prob do the 2PM if I can't make the saturday, but if ur not there then I won't go, and if ur not there and I don't go, I'll make it up to you somehow babe. Hope I get to see you/the play!! hope I didn't cause any trouble! talk to you later, love.