FanFic: ZoroxSanji ~Dear From XXX~

[sa_runna]

Title : Dear from xxx

Author : Sa_Runna

Chapter : One Shot

Pairing : Zoro x Sanji

Summary : Sanji received a valentine gift from the mysterious Mr.xxx.

Author’s note: KYAAAA!! I forgot my main reason to be here as an author by posting fanarts T.T … Again, not beta-readed and I’m very2 sorry to post this raw fanfiction. I didn’t have any beta reader and

Comments

[blizzardrake]

D'awwww~

That just made me warm up like a bag of popcorn in the microwave~ so cute~

[sa_runna]

awwwww, thank you... but don't stay too long in the microwave ^^

[mishagirl]

There were a few things I didn't understand...but it could just be the language issue...

So Sanji recognizes the gift as a new type of chocolate. Zoro tells him it isn't chocolate. What is it then? I didn't get that it was something dirty or anything. Was it a chocolate flavored cigarette or something?

I'm a little confused. It also goes from being a chocolate cigar to sanji thanking him for a cigarette he wanted.

I liked the ending and Sanji and zoros exchange about the time being 5 minutes before 10.

[sa_runna]

So I really did confuse you, I'm really sorry ^^;;
Yes, If there were mint flavoured cigarettes then I thought it would be nice if zoro could give Sanji a chocolate flavored cigar for valentine!! XDD
Zoro thought it would be too girly if he gave Sanji sweets or chocolates and Sanji himself thought the rest of the crew would laugh at him if he bought a girly thing like chocolate flavored cigarette or something like that even if he really wanted it and since he received it from Zoro he would gladly accept it ^^

Well, did that make sense??
Sorry for my mistakeable english ^^;;
By the way thank you for your comment!

[mr_redrum]

...honestly,reading this,I didn't need any chocolate/candy to make my teeth hurt...it's sweet!...I like it!...zoro really caring about sanji's feeling that's make me happy inside!...thank you for sharing,dear ^_^...

ps: jadi inget zaman dulu waktu permen coklat bentuk rokok lagi populer.gue sering beli tuh...and, really sorry I can't judge about your english, since mine also bad, anyway...

[sa_runna]

Thanks!! And don't forget to go to the dentist once a month, beb. ^^
Dan emang idenya diambil dari situh. Trus gw jadi bertanya2 apakah ada rokok dengan rasa coklat? Yah bgitulah ^^

[kuku_hara]

I can't say I'm perfect with the English grammar, but i dont mind beta-ing for you ^^ drop a line at my LJ if u need me^^

I'm for anything Zosan XDD

[kuku_hara]

and comment of the fic itself....

sweeeet~~~~ melts my heart~ (though it's not yet time for valentines... hahaha :p)

[sa_runna]

Really, you will?????? *glimmer* Okay then XDD. By the way, I need your e-mail in case I want you to beta-read my fics and ask for your opinion about it.
You're miyavi's loyal fans, aren't you? I'm jealous with all your experience in his concert!! I can't even imagine he'll come to my country TT.TT But well, hoping and dreaming isn't a crime afterall ^0^
Jaa~ Yoroshiku Onegai Shimasu!! *bow*

[ends_of_time]

awwww, that was cute! Those two make me smile! Thanks for the post!

[sa_runna]

the pirate hunter roronoa zoro and the black leg sanji can be cute as well ^^

thanks for the comment too XDD

[dangerousnami21]

That was so sweet~!XD It made me feel all warm inside.

[sa_runna]

i feel warm when I wrote this too ^^. Thank you... ^^