Poem update

[saadofthepeople]

I've come to the Fruition (yep! im learning new words) that even though I think I don't have what I want, I am usually just having problem adjusting to to change. So I wrote this poem as advice to all.

"Change" By Saad Dardai

You can't live life without change
it's inevitable....
learn to adapt and rearrange
To what is normal and what is strange
it is

Comments

Um

[tinkertoyglittr]

Hi Mr. Sleepy,

Please stick to organic chemestry, 'cause that is seeeeauuu NOT a poem.

I'll fill in the sappy poet's slot, and you fill in the smarty chemists' slot, 'cauz(sic) I am no good in chemestry.

Re: Um

[saadofthepeople]

uh? who the heck are you to tell me what is and isn't a poem? a poem is a verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme. (dictionary.com)
These are my own words,and if you have nothing encouraging to say about it, then why bother reading it?
Also, you seem to not understand, You have no power over what I do, Your opinion means nothing to me if it discourages my own beliefs. So please don't comment here anymore.