Comments | saavikam77: Fic: Come Undone | DCU | Jason/Tim | PG (this part)

saavikam77

Fic: Come Undone | DCU | Jason/Tim | PG (this part) | 1/3

Apr 21, 2009 12:16

Title: Come Undone - Part 1
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Jason/Tim
Rating: PG - this part; will be NC-17 in future parts
Word Count: 726
Prompt: For dcu_freeforall and 50_darkfics: Mask
Summary: With Gotham going to hell in a hand basket, Jason and Tim are working tirelessly to get fix the damage that's occurred since Bruce's disappearance. After a hard patrol leaves them utterly ( Read more... )

challenge: dcu_freeforall, fandom: dcu, ch: batman, pr: batman/robin iii, ch: robin iii, fic: challenge fic, series: come undone, ch: tim drake, ch: jason todd, .fic, fic: fic, challenge: 50_darkfics, series: together, pr: jason todd/tim drake

Comments 25

elenorasweet April 21 2009, 23:35:39 UTC

I feel so sorry for Jason; I don't know how they do it.

"as they manage to get the rest of suit off" <- I think there's a 'the' missing there...

I really like this, how Jason was the one to be just crazy enough to not... go crazy? That's a terrible way to put it, but you know what I mean.

And the fact that Tim helps Jason out of his suit and into the shower and all. He's such a good Robin.

saavikam77 April 21 2009, 23:44:01 UTC

I don't know, either. They're made from stronger stuff than I am, that's for sure!

Thanks for catching my typo! I'll go fix that. :)

And yeah, poor Jason really is just left of center enough to not let the Mission eat him alive. *pets him*

Thanks!

zombierobin April 22 2009, 01:38:40 UTC

I love your writing style! You have an immense talent to reduce your readers to quite undignified flailing and various 'awww' noises without ever being sugary or anything feeling superfluous. Thank you for sharing!

saavikam77 April 22 2009, 02:52:27 UTC

Thank you so much! ^__^ *beams* I'm so glad you liked this.

thealisonbailey April 22 2009, 02:04:06 UTC

I'm going to ignore cannon and replace it with this. =)

saavikam77 April 22 2009, 02:52:56 UTC

Yay!! ^__^ Thanks so much!

larsinger29 April 22 2009, 02:56:41 UTC

I definitely felt for the poor boys; Tim because this is a completely new situation for him, and he's dealing with his unpredictable older brother--Jason because of the sheer exhausted-ness you managed to convey.

Loving this start! I'm eager to see where you take this.

saavikam77 April 22 2009, 13:45:20 UTC

They really are out of their element here. *pets them*

Thanks so much!

cat_13145 April 22 2009, 07:03:05 UTC

(Wants to hug both boys tightly, never let them go and beat up DC for hurting them so).
Really pleased to see a long story in the works, hoping for regular updates soon.
This is my Jason.

saavikam77 April 22 2009, 13:49:03 UTC

They need so many hugs. And Jay should definitely be given a chance to be the good guy for once.

This is only going 3 short parts, so not really long at all. Part 2 should be up later today.

Thanks!