Fic: One Night at the Planet | DCU/Superman Returns | Clark/Lois | NC-17 | 2/2

[saavikam77]

Title: One Night at the Planet - Part 2
Fandom: DCU (Superman Returns)
Pairing: Clark/Lois
Rating: NC-17 - for graphic sexual content
Word Count: 10,833 (both parts together)
Summary: Set seven months after Superman Returns, Clark and Lois seek each other out as work and life stresses get to them, finding solace with each other late one night at

Comments

HEY!!

[mssupafan]

Welcome to LJ Saavi!

You know I already love this story *coughFOScough*. But I have to give you props here too! Both chappys are AB FAB!! So HOT and STEAMY. Lucky Lois! and Delicious Clark!! I hope to read more stories like this from you. :D

Re: HEY!!

[saavikam77]

Thanks, Felicia!!! :D You know I'll be writing more like this after Aftermath is done! ;)

[jij]

Mmm, I love the identity porn in this (um, as well as the real stuff, LOL!) Clark wanting her to want Clark, and her realization of all his identities, and acceptance of them was really nice.

Taking in the vision before him, Clark was awestruck by how incredibly beautiful she was, how lithe and toned, with just that soft, rounded hint of a belly that spoke of motherhood, the motherhood of his child... “Lois...” he whispered, unable to complete a coherent thought.

I really like Clark's sort of dumbstruck awe here, both at the confused shock of knowing how intimately linked they are while she doesn't and at the simple desire of the moment. And Lois's delighted surprise at her revelations about Clark's physique was delicious. :)

[saavikam77]

I don't think I've ever heard the term identity porn before! :p Certainly fits though. I suppose Lois would have to accept all of that once she'd slept with Clark, only to realize she'd slept with Kal-El! ^_~

I really loved dropping those little hints to his identity, having her figure out the puzzle by exploring his body. The moles were the clincher (Gods, I love those moles *drool*), but it was seeing the sudden curl drop out from behind the rest of his hair when he came that truly did it for Lois.

Once again, thanks so much! *twirls in circles, ecstatic for feedback* :D

[saavikam77]

Thank you! ^_^ Glad to be your smutty goodness provider for today. :p This was actually only the second piece of smut I ever wrote (as an adult :p), so I've been grateful for how well it's been received!

[saavikam77]

Hehe.. perhaps. :p

[saavikam77]

Uh... sorry you didn't like SR. O_o I *LOVED* it, and everything about it. Otherwise, I wouldn't be writing this stuff!

Glad you liked this, anyway. :)

wow

[remey74]

that was awesome i cant wait to read more by you please keep them coming . i love reading about one of my favorite couples . in case you are wondering they are Lois/Clark , Henry/Vicky and Mick/Beth

Re: wow

[saavikam77]

Hmm.. haven't had much feedback on *this* story in a while!

There's plenty more Clark/Lois on my journal, just click on "My Fic Index" in the sidebar, and everything is listed alphabetically by pairing. :)

Thanks so much!