Comments | saavikam77: Fic: A Letter to Bruce | DCU | Clark/Lois, Clark/Bruce| R

saavikam77

Fic: A Letter to Bruce | DCU | Clark/Lois, Clark/Bruce| R | 1/1 (1/3 in Letters series)

Nov 10, 2007 15:34

Title: A Letter to Bruce
Fandom: DCU
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Lois, Clark/Bruce, mention of Bruce/Selina
Rating: R
Word Count: 765
Prompt/Scenario: Clark writes a letter to someone.
Summary: Clark isn't entirely enjoying his vacation
Disclaimer: DC and WB own it all. I own nothing. Darnit.
Author's Note: Written for houseofel's Clark Kent Challenge.

( A Letter to Bruce )

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Comments 26

svgurl November 10 2007, 22:01:28 UTC

I really liked this! I usually love Clois but I wished Clark would run back to Bruce. They need to be with each other.

I love their e-mail addresses and the e-mail was so Clark. It's obvious he still wants Bruce. :)

Excellent fic. Thanks for sharing!

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 02:48:07 UTC

Thanks. I actually envision this as turning into a (slightly reluctant on Lois's part) OT3. ^_~ Glad you liked the characterization here. It's my first Clark first person fic! O_O

Thanks again. :D

greeneyelove November 10 2007, 22:48:46 UTC

This was really cool. I love the style, just Clark's thoughts and obvious longing for Bruce. I hope we get to see a reply email back to Clark from Bruce!

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 02:48:55 UTC

Clark is so NOT subtle. :p He can't help it.

And I might just have to do that.

Thanks!!!

loqia November 10 2007, 23:08:58 UTC

Not that that's not a distinct possibility, considering my relationship with gravity, but you get the idea.
Okay, I lol'd. XD

Very nice slice-of-life. And poor Clark, seems he's getting a bit of cabin fever there, eh?

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 02:50:01 UTC

Haha! Glad you liked this. He's *definitely* feeling a little walled-in by Lois. :p

wachey November 10 2007, 23:48:56 UTC

I think you need to do a follow-up piece to this one!! Lets see what Bruce says in reply!!

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 02:50:32 UTC

Haha! That's two votes. ^_~

Thanks!

ladybugkay November 11 2007, 00:44:23 UTC

Great! And now, there should be a flurry of correspondence between them until Clark realizes he really needs to dump Lois and go for the man it sounds like he's only been with once. Fly, my pretty, fly back to Gotham!

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 02:53:30 UTC

Thank you! :D Don't think I want to make this an email series (don't want to step on arch_schatten's toes), but that's a third vote for a response.... ^_~ There could be a more ficcish follow up later. :p Clark definitely needs to follow his heart.

arch_schatten November 11 2007, 06:06:19 UTC

Tehee! Not stepping on my toes at all! I vote for Bruce's reply as well! 4 votes! or 5th, I dunno! But I definitely vote. I love the constraints writing them in first person through letters gives, it's so personal and.. maddening at times X) This was brilliant and I loved it!

Not that that's not a distinct possibility, considering my relationship with gravity, but you get the idea.

I LOLed hard there :) I really like Clark's wistful tone and his 'not that I don't love her but it's driving me crazyyyy' careful wording. It's.. a complicated situation to be in, but he's got to be going insane without contact from the world outside! Sneaky Clark, write Bruce emails!

Also, BatxCat. Mrooow!! <3

saavikam77 November 11 2007, 14:23:38 UTC

Aw, thanks! ^_^ I'll definitely have to write Bruce's reply, with so much clamor for it. :p

Glad you like my Clark voice. He tries to be so diplomatic, as conflicted as he is here.

And you're the first person to mention the Bat/Cat reference. :p I imagine poor Clark has a hard time shutting that out. O_O

Thanks again!