Fic: The Greatest Gift I Can Give You | DCU/SR/BB | Clark/Bruce | PG-13 | 5/8

Feb 11, 2008 12:59

Title: The Greatest Gift I Can Give You - Part 5
Fandom: DCU (Superman Returns/Batman Begins)
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,503 (this section)
Summary: (this section) It's Thanksgiving at the Manor, and certain discoveries are made. Clark overhears a conversation he wishes he didn't.
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wachey February 11 2008, 21:11:59 UTC
I'm with Richard, dammit Lois!!! Let Jason see his father!!!

That and I'd like to see Jason and Dick interact. Hm...*gets ideas*

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saavikam77 February 11 2008, 21:16:28 UTC
Yeah, this Lois is being *more* than unreasonable. Richard is definitely the sane one in that couple here.

No worries, there will be interaction between the boys... eventually. ^_^

Thanks!!

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wachey February 11 2008, 23:46:54 UTC
Oh you and your eventuallys X3

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saavikam77 February 12 2008, 00:29:39 UTC
Hehe... How better to prolong the anticipation? :p

Only 3 parts left, anyway. ^_^

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svgurl February 11 2008, 22:51:27 UTC
Poor Richard ... he's such a good guy for dealing with her. I love Dick finding out. He's so adorable!

And I like Bruce & Dick bonding. They're great but my heart aches for poor Clark. *pets him*

I hope he gets to see Jason soon!

Thanks for the update! :D

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saavikam77 February 11 2008, 23:04:36 UTC
He is, at that. *hugs him*

And don't you just want to huggle Dick so tight? :p

Clark will get to see Jason... eventually. ^_~

Thanks so much!!

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bradygirl_12 February 11 2008, 23:23:22 UTC
*more dancing, more joy* :)

Of course I love Dick finding out Bruce's secret, and then getting all excited over Clark's! LOL! He's such a delight!

This chapter had a lot of joy, Saavi, and a lot of pain. Truly, Jason needs to see his father, and needs to get help with his powers. Sure, Clark had to train himself with his human parents, but Jonathan and Martha didn't hate the manifestation of those powers as Lois is right now. They just wanted Clark to keep them under wraps.

Now you know I love Bruce and Dick playing football, too! ;)

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saavikam77 February 11 2008, 23:35:09 UTC
Hee hee!! ^_^

I swear, I felt like a kid, myself, writing that scene. Of course, this chapter was the main reason I contacted you in the first place about writing Dick. Well, this and part 4. Originally, I had him dropping the reveal on Bruce the first time he set foot in the Manor, which just seemed... too soon. So I'm ecstatic I got it right afterward. :p

Yeah, poor Clark's heart is absolutely breaking here, hearing the way Lois is treating Jason. No worries, though. Things work out. Eventually.

Glad you liked the football, too. I just couldn't resist. ^_^

Thanks so much!!!

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greeneyelove February 12 2008, 00:04:07 UTC
Go Richard! She needs to hear it!

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saavikam77 February 12 2008, 00:33:11 UTC
Most definitely. *nods*

Thanks!!

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dm_wyatt February 12 2008, 02:25:08 UTC
Aw...

I love that Dick figured out on his own that Bruce is batman, that his discovering the batcase was just confirmation.

The heartbreaking part is Clark trying to deal with Lois keeping Jason away from him. So sad that Clark is hearing how awful Lois is being while not being able to do anything about it.

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saavikam77 February 12 2008, 12:28:43 UTC
Hehe.. ^_^ Dick is awesome like that, and I just couldn't resist having him figure it out on his own.

As much as I hate writing Lois like this, and having poor Clark hearing it all, I'm glad it's having the right impact. The situation is frustrating, to say the least.

Thank you!!

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