Osan (8/?)

[sab08]

Title: Osan

Genre: Alternate Reality

Length: 8/?

Disclaimer: I don't own DBSK. And the plot is not purely mine. I was inspired by King of Attolia, written by Megan Whalen Turner.

Summary: Yunho learns about the errors in their records. And a lot more.

A/N:  Osan, Busan and Naju are three different kingdoms. The king or prince of a kingdom is usually

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[sab08]

SPOT for lemonademelon

[lemonademelon]

as usual, I LOVE THE UPDATE and I love you more :')

thankyou for the early present love <3 :D

love youuuuu and gosh Yunho, man up and protect your brother, will you?! Or let Naju protect him!

[sab08]

i'm glad you love it~! i was afraid that you'd find this boring.. >.<

<3<3<3 i'm not sure if i can post on your birthday so i posted it early.. ^_____________^ i love you too.. *hugs*

lol.. yunho being so... i can't say weak.. but then, he hasn't experienced protecting anything in his life so he's clueless about it.

[lemonademelon]

it's not!! love it :DDD idk when i can post yours.... but hopefully on time >< huhu

ah yeah, that's true~ hopefully yunho will be able to protect his brother later! and chunnie so cute xD

[miszc]

It's not boring. Just .. Lack of action? :)
But really .. jae needs some rest too! too much action tire him out, keke... ~~
Soo that's what happened. I remember asking why did the King send Jae to other kingdom before. So that's why..
And Jae is secretly protecting Yunho! :)) I hope YooSu is loyal to the king. I just can't imagine them betraying him. What's Heechul position in the palace? Royal Advisor?

poor Jaejae. The suffering is just too much. he had a hard life and time. But he has such a big heart!! <3 *huggie him*

pss : that's a fast update!? XD

[sab08]

yes, lack of action. xD i hope i can put some on the next chapter.

yes, everything in one day. and then he rests by drinking a jar of unwatered wine.. :)) not a good way to rest..

yes, yes.. :D i haven't determined yoosu's loyalty yet.. >.<

heechul's the secretary of archives. he's the main source of information cause he's in charge of all the spies of the kingdom.. he's can also give advise to the king if need be, but more or less he's main role is to gather information. in our generation, to gather gossip.. xDDD

yes, for a prince, he had a very traumatizing childhood.
yes, ^^ he has..

i was able to determine the best time for me to sit in front of my laptop and type. that's why i can update fast. and because my professors don't want to have classes yet, that's why i have the time. but i think after this, it'll take a while before i can update again..

i have no clear plot and i'm glad i can finish a chapter every time i sit down.. ^^
i'm so glad you're still here.. thank you so much~! <3

[dulanis]

Oh Por Jae. The story kees getting more interesting. Good work. :)

[sab08]

thank you~! <3 i'm glad you find this interesting.. i'll work harder..

thank you for reading~! ^^

[catzchii]

Gosh.. I love u n ur story..lol..n no, it wasn't boring at all... I'm still hooked, btw.. :) thanks 4 d fast update...

[sab08]

i'm glad you love it.. ^^
i love you too for sticking with my story.. *hugs*

and i'm glad you're still hooked. i'll work harder.. ^________^

ur wlcome~!! ^^ and thank you for reading~!

[shat_private]

Yay~ we got some back story for Jae~ It was really interesting. I like the idea about the king's thief. Of course I have some questions too... xD Like for example - Jae is the older brother and so he should be the crown price. So was it ok for him to become the king's thief?

By the way... I just LOVE the fact that Jae IS Min's thief... xD lol~ he even stole his heart. ;P

Also, if Changmin is already the king of Naju is it ok for him to go to Osan all the time? xD

I really like this cool side of Jae~ jumping on the roofs, spying and everything. Although I would imagine him being just super lame from time to time and idk... missing the rooftop, falling over his own feet and sneezing when hiding. xD

[sab08]

he was the crown prince but then, he wasn't in osan when his father died. his grandfather was still alive during that time and that's when another side story begins.. ^_____________^ i'll write about that soon.. and yes, he preferred being the king's thief for his only responsibility is to execute whatever the king's order is. and as jaejoong revealed, min doesn't order him around. he has a say on things.. and one thing jae hates about being a king is passing on punishments.. >.< okay, i think i'm revealing too much. more will be reveales soon, you inspired me with this question i might be able to finish another chapter tonight.. xD <3

yes, hahaha. poor min, cause once its stolen, he can't get it back..

Well, no actually. that's why he was almost attacked by busan.. >.< that's why he keeps on persuading Jae to go back so that he won't travel much. though he's kingdom is much more peaceful than osan so his people can manage for a day or two

[shat_private]

I like being inspiration. xD I can ask you even more questions if you want! ;P I have lot's of questions!

Ok, so from what you said, Jae decided to be thief? I mean, he was kidnapped by his grandfather and trained and everything, but in the end it was his decision to pledge loyalty to Changmin? (that's why I love it so much xD Jae being loyal to Min~ )
So does that mean that Yunho is in fact the king?

Lol~ Min should just steal Jae's heart too. ;P And keep it safe~

Naju seems more peaceful and idk... maybe it's just me but it seems more civilized? xD with higher culture?
What I also like is that Min let Jae make his own decisions. Which may not be the best for Naju~ but what the hell!! Min is in love, he doesn't think straight.

Hahaha that is the best. Jae being all super cool, extra ninja style! And then Min comes along and his tripping, whining and being cute~ How could Min not love him? xD I bet it was all Jae's master plan to make Min fall in love with him! ;P

[sab08]

list them then i'll ask for the list later.. ^___________^

well, he was destined to be the thief because he's the only candidate for the position. yunho wasn't trained to be a thief so he's not counted. he can't turn away from that unless he dies or if changmin is dethroned, then he won't be the king's thief anymore because his king is only min, his loyalty belongs to him. that's why they practically grew up together.. xD

i think if you grew up together, you'll be loyal to him..?

yes, it was during yunho's coronation as a king that he almost cut off jaejoong's hand right?

yes, yes. cause osan has internal problems, the barons. they can't seem to agree with one another.. >.<

yes, he doesn't think straight.. xD

yes, i agree.. haha.. idk about that.. he acts oblivious to the fact that min just confessed to him in one of the past chapters,, XD