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Osan (11/15)

Dec 29, 2012 19:14

Title: Osan

Genre: Alternate Reality

Length: 11/15

Disclaimer: I don't own DBSK. And the plot is not purely mine. I was inspired by King of Attolia, written by Megan Whalen Turner. I actually borrowed some of the scenes from it

Summary: Jaejoong has decided to return to his homeland, leaving his good life and cousin behind. But what will ( Read more... )

fanfiction, osan

Comments 11

fukada_kyoko78 December 29 2012, 15:26:59 UTC

is he a thief or a life saver?

sab08 December 30 2012, 04:23:15 UTC

He's the Changmin's thief, he hasn't retired yet. Though he's trying to help Yunho in managing their kingdom as of the moment. :)

miszc December 29 2012, 18:00:44 UTC

Its been a longggg while.
I reread this too refresh my mind of what happened in every chapter! :) I love how it goes xD I'm in love with a historical setting. Esp one w this. The myth n mysteries n history! :D 4 more chapters really? Hehe! Will be waiting, fighting xÐ

sab08 December 30 2012, 04:13:37 UTC

Yes, it's been really a looooooong while. Sorry for the wait. OTL

I'm trying to give myself a margin. I'm not really good at writing chaptered stories so, I'm doing my best to finish this one soon. ^^ but it might reach 20 at most. I guess?

I'm so glad you're still here. *huggles*

Thank you so much! :D

kattan69 December 29 2012, 18:04:55 UTC

JJ is so resourceful. I'm just happy that he is always a step ahead of everyone.

sab08 December 30 2012, 04:24:59 UTC

He is. ^^
Tho he didn't expect Junsu to mix the lethium in his milk. :))

Thank you for reading and commenting! ^____^

lemonademelon December 30 2012, 04:50:29 UTC

woaah <3

the scene with yoochun sure caught my attention :p

sab08 December 30 2012, 05:00:26 UTC

Hahaha. I thought no one would notice it. But you sure have a sharp eye when it comes to the soulmates. ;)

What do you think? ^^ should I push it through?

lemonademelon December 30 2012, 05:03:36 UTC

i'm biased like that xD

Yes please???? *puppy eyes*

sab08 December 30 2012, 05:10:28 UTC

Hahaha. I know. I'm kinda biased like that too. As you can see. Hahaha.

I'm kind of reviewing the plot in my mind right now (cause my laptop is somewhere on my bed and I haven't turned it on yet). I think there will be more later. ;)

I might update tonight again, if I can. I'm reviewing the scenes. And I think this is the first chapter that I was able to make a scene for each one of them without being in one place. XD

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