The Place of the Gods

[saberwulfchan]

“It’s been awhile…” a man’s voice echoed weakly through a large underground tunnel, “…Alfred F. Jones.” Alfred jumped slightly but for sure the infiltrator could tell he was all too surprised.

“It was all a matter of time,” that man standing taller than Alfred, marches in nonchalantly.

Alfred was pretty tall himself with a strong build, actually

Comments

[miss_auto1621]

Aw, you made me feel special! Thank you for the honor! This is not trash, and you don't owe me anything! I just like to help. :) And I'm glad you had motivation to post this! Ever since you told me the Cold War head canon, you've had me thinking about it. I have the perfect artwork for this fic. :)

I like the idea. Your writing is actually pretty good and it sounds like you know what you're doing. You just need a touch-up with a little grammar-editing. :D You put yourself down a lot with your writing! Don't do that! Have more confidence in your skill!

I suggest that when you make a character cuss, let them cuss. You'll have a warning about language in your lj-cut where the rating goes. I'll give you a basic Lj-cut format so you can place before your fics. :)

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Update soon, please!

kk

[saberwulfchan]

grazie well thats alot a help you've given me really it's too much
anyways i would've gotten a 100% on that lil project if it wasn't for my terrible grammar
screw ingles
porque no puedo estudiar en espanol es mas facil

Re: kk

[miss_auto1621]

Welcomes! I'm glad I was of some help. :)

Aw, well, congrats on your 98%, though! It's an excellent grade!
I know what you mean. Me gusta el Espaniol mejor, pero a veces, se me hace dificil escribirlo. XD

Well, we are in America...