Comments | sabinaluvsrydon: I May Not Be Loved, But They Always Recall My Name [1/1]

sabinaluvsrydon

I May Not Be Loved, But They Always Recall My Name [1/1]

Apr 16, 2010 10:33

This fic has been relocated HERE to stones_at_moons

rating: pg-13, pairing: gabe/william, band: the academy is…, band: cobra starship, band: panic! at the disco

Comments 9

I May Not Be Loved, But They Always Recall My Name [1/1] bookxbutterfly May 9 2010, 08:01:56 UTC

wow! this is actually really good for something that's unbeta'd! :D

i really liked Gabe's good/bad character. :P

and, um, i guess i'm willing to beta? :)

Re: I May Not Be Loved, But They Always Recall My Name [1/1] sabinaluvsrydon May 9 2010, 09:59:29 UTC

Thankies!

And yeah, that's great, thanks! Just send me your email, and I'll write. Or maybe you want mine? It's sabina2tars@xtra.co.nz :3

happyemo777 May 17 2010, 22:03:09 UTC

The pacing was a bit too fast but it was a nice story over-all. I couldn't tell if it wasn't handled by a beta at all.

Man, I love serial!Gabe for some reason and you portrayed him well in this story. Though it felt kind of shoehorned, the Gabilliam was a nice touch in the end and an interesting motivation to make Gabe the way he is in this fic.

Great job!

sabinaluvsrydon May 18 2010, 03:31:04 UTC

Thanks! I really love critisism. I guess I did pace it really fast, probably because I just really wanted to finish it, and I also like the end.

Um, what does shoehorned mean? Sorry :3

happyemo777 May 18 2010, 12:31:10 UTC

You're welcome. Making one-shots/darbbles often fall prey to this, am an expert myself, and it can be handled after you've gotten use to writing small fics. You'll be able to slow down after...eight or nine small fics or three long drabbles.

Shoehorned means, to me at least, forcing one thing into another at the last minute in order to have it fit. Like that plastic stick thing you use to make your feet go inside some shoes.

sabinaluvsrydon May 18 2010, 20:59:22 UTC

Ha, ok, thanks a lot!

commenting again... :P bookxbutterfly June 1 2010, 10:10:45 UTC

the "awesome" me? aww, shucks, you shouldn't have. :"D

i still think this is ~da bomb~ though. even without my beta-ing. ;D

Re: commenting again... :P sabinaluvsrydon June 1 2010, 10:37:24 UTC

Why thank you, dahling. Your beta-ing made it so much better, though! I'll keep in touch ;)

Re: commenting again... :P bookxbutterfly June 1 2010, 10:41:20 UTC

aww, thanks so much! you're making me blush. :"D

alright. ;D