Never say sorry...

[sabiz]

The night really was quite beautiful. There never was anything quite like the full moon in a clear sky and a silver-lit landscape. And, though it was bitingly cold outside, Triat was at her open window, curled up on the sill as she gazed out into the autumn night. There was no real reason for her to be bothered that night--if anything, she might

Comments

Hrm

[serenityalli]

I like it because...It's real, the way you describe the feelings..How she reacted... *Nods slowly, hugs Sabi* It's so real it scares me.. And your writing is terrific because it helps you relate to the characters..

*Sighs* Yes... You have a wonderful skill, yet another. Man. See, when I read things, anything I guess, I try to relate to it, put myself in that possition, pro'lly why I love RPing so much..And your writing is so vivid...*nods* Well you know...

Yes...I so need that zombie face right now...

[aquamoods]

...Write more.
The way you put so much depth into your characters in just a short scene...that's talent.

[lostlonepup]

This is very well written.

I wanted to cry when I read it. So that shows you how much it reachd me, nae. -nods-

Very very good. You have a talent for writing something that'll touch emotionally. Not many ppl have that. -applauds-