In the Dark 5/?

Sep 01, 2010 09:39

Captain Jack Harkness stepped out of the shadows and walked up to them. His demeanor casual, but his blue eyes flickered to the couple in front of him, taking in the look in the Doctor’s eyes and the confusion in Rose’s ( Read more... )

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housemaid79 September 2 2010, 03:39:41 UTC
Interesting... I love seeing Jack all protective (of both of them, really). And poor Rose - she must be so confused. Thrilled to see this chapter had been posted, and (of course) dying for more!

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sable_falls September 2 2010, 12:02:51 UTC
Thank you!Jack is going to be a very important part to this story. I think at times he balances them out.

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othermewriter September 2 2010, 05:33:40 UTC
Oh S*** the Jello is going to seriously hit the fan very very soon! What in the world are they going to do? *chews knuckles*

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sable_falls September 2 2010, 12:03:22 UTC
haha I'm happy to hear I have come up with a good knuckle biter!

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syramak September 2 2010, 13:29:21 UTC
She had not time to truly process everything that had happened and he doubted it would be pleasant when she did.
That line gives me the chills. Yay Captain Jack, and hopefully some sanity and conversation. Can't wait for more!

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sable_falls September 2 2010, 13:43:41 UTC
I confess that yes it is going to get worse before it gets better. I had a difficult time trying to decide how to handle this subject matter, but I think that so far its coming along well

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develish1 September 2 2010, 17:46:30 UTC
knuckle biter is right, can't wait for the next chapter.

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sable_falls September 2 2010, 18:03:15 UTC
Tomorrow I will post an update.

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scubagurl22 September 2 2010, 22:45:10 UTC
Yay, it was Jack! Very worried about what the morning will be though.

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sable_falls September 2 2010, 23:30:32 UTC
and you should be lol

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