Title: The Soccer AU Part 5/12

[sablewick]

Title: The Soccer AU Part 5/12
Fandom: Eagle of the Ninth
Characters: Marcus, Esca
First prompt: Self Harm
Summary: Esca wants to run away from the entire world, things keep getting in the way.
Warnings: Contains descriptions of self harm as per the prompt, might be a little triggery for some people.
Author note: Yeah, yeah, it's been ages.

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Comments

[delvinan]

Oh hurray, what an unexpected treat! I wish Esca could, you know, speak more, when people ask him questions and accuse him of things. It generally helps. But poor thing, he probably hasn't had good experiences of that in the past. And he should try sleeping somewhere else, like, I don't know, Marcus's room, perhaps?

The 'flashback' was absolutely adorable - they are so tender with each other in that world. And lambs! And the comment about lots of foxes because lots of mice. I love the details. I was totally disoriented with the return to the present day, and jumping into the middle of the conversation between Marcus and Placidus, but you must have intended that - very well done.

I can only encourage you to write more of this wonderful story!