Good Night [Princess Tutu, FakirxRue, 24]; Killing Time [Princess Tutu, FakirxRue, 6]

Sep 03, 2007 12:48

Title: Good Night
Author/Artist: sabssmith Sabs will do.
Pairing: FakirxRue
Fandom: Princess Tutu
Theme: 24. Good night
Disclaimer: Princess Tutu belongs to Ikuko Itoh and the respective artists, etc. I don't own it, which is good because I'd kill it, kay.

'Princess Tutu? What nonsense. Isn't that just a story?...' )

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haleysings September 3 2007, 20:37:04 UTC
Although I'm not a fan of Fakir/Rue, I really like your writing style. The second one was particularly good, I thought--Rue wondering what sort of person Fakir would even take to something like that. I like Fakir wondering about Mytho's dreams, as well.

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sabssmith September 3 2007, 23:32:23 UTC
Why thank you. :'D I'm glad you enjoyed the two pieces, and I'm particularly thrilled you liked the second one, since I was having trouble getting Rue to sound like Rue without ruining her daydream in a sense.

I had to stick that part with Fakir wondering about Mytho's dreams in there, just to chuckle a little at his grumpiness. Anyway, I also enjoyed describing Mytho's sleeping with that simile (it's almost as though I've heard it somewhere... -trying to remember-).

I'm not too much of a fan of FakirxRue either, but it's a challenge I'm definitely willing to take. My goal is to create such an interesting love between the two of them that, by the end of the 30 Kisses prompts, the reader will be drawn into their relationship. I think I will be too. <3

Thanks for the comment! ;3

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haleysings September 4 2007, 18:00:04 UTC
^^ I thought she seemed a little more in-character in the second story, so I think you did a very good job. (Not to say she was OOC in the first, either.)

Ahhh, I see! ^^ It'll be interesting to see how that comes out! So will it be AU (in the sense that Rue will choose Fakir over Mytho), or will it have them some sort of mutual attraction within the canon story but still going their separate ways?

You're welcome! ^_^

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