Entranced by metaphysical poetry

[saccharinesoul]

I love Ms Miller. That's all I have to say.

This is the homework for her class - we were supposed to write a metaphysical piece of our own, which I wasn't too keen on performing, by fear of ruining the art. My mind still confused is by this piece, yet I love the confusion. Wow, this assignment is fucking me up.

Anyways, here's what I wrote.

Wrong

Comments

[itsumotanzen]

I hate you for being so amazing.
No really, I love you.
I hate you. <3
You're too amazing for me xD

It sounds like your relationship with love.
I love the themes and allusions you wove in.
Your poetic sense served you well for this assignment ^___^