Title: Shattered souls and never-ending tears
Pairing: Broken!Junseung, Kiseung, Broken!Junseob
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Junhyung is jealous that Hyunseung had gotten together with Kikwang, and he ponders on his own relationship. It takes one mistake, to ruin everything.
Author Notes: Dedicated to
cindyxmc for giving me the inspiration and the idea to
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i was seriously going to curse yoseob out when he went hug junhyung
but since he broke up with him and all that serious talk and stuff, i'll let him go. haha
but omg kwangie! he punched the wall o.O
he made me afraid of him for a little, haha.
but i still love my ball of sunshine and luscious lips. <33
and when he totally called hyunseung Bambi! haha
i can totally imagine his whining voice "BUT BAMBI~~~" LOL
AND WTHECK, why am i feeling sorry for junhyung now? =/
only a little though, he totally deserved that slap and so much more.
i...i...um...have another plot bunny, wtf =X
kiki totally beating the crap out of junhyung! haha nah, i'm just kidding.
i'm really really satisfied with this ending.
can't possibly write something else. haha love it too much to add more drama.
XDDDD
ahhhhhh, I LOVE YOU<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
thank you for saving me a spot!
i feel so special, keke ^^
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In my perverted mind, Kiki is the type that is like a fluffball, with a dark side creepy enough to scare the life out of anybody.
:O I can totally imagine that too! XD
LOL. XD
Glad that you like it!♥
You're welcome! You totally deserved a spot!
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Now where to freakin begin?! THIS made me cry again. Gah and not cause of Junhyung but because he's playing around with Hyunseung. I felt like screaming "Geesh you effed up your chances with him Jun! Leave him alone now!"
And Kiki, BOY DO i wanna see his DARK SIDE muahaha!!! *perverted much..*
He should've punched Junnie when he had the chance...MAN so much hate towards him..i feel terrible. I still love him hehe<3333 but not here T___T poor Yoseobie *sobs* great JunJun, you messing with two hearts. Kiki SHOULD punch you. >:|
OMO, what, this is the end? But But But But..things need to get settled :( no matter how much jun is a nuisance here...i can't just see it end with him crying. WAHHHHHHHH. I LOVED IT ANYHOW<33333
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Well, I seemed to like making Jun the bad guy all the damn times so haha. >:3
Oh-ho? Kiki, wonderful wonderful ball of fluff that could kill you with his cuteness. Or his evil side. ;D
I know right? Kiki would totally punch him. One for messing with his lover, two for messing with his best friend. D:<
D: But but! Inspiration! I don't wanna fucked up the whole series by giving it a lousy ending. D: So yeah, I'll just leave it alone for the time being. :P
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It's okay cause bad guy Jun = WIN. >:3
Fluff or evilness, Kiki is smex on legs hohoho ;D
It's hard to imagine who will win tho. Cause Jun...is well...tough. And so is Kiki. But since Jun messed with both his lover and best friend...Jun is totally K.O-ed right there rofl!
Yes yes, we shall leave it at this ending. :) It's still superduperawesome either way :3
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Aww, you're so sweet.
Didn't online cos' I don't feel like it,
nah, just cos' I didn't on my com. {:
I love this man!
I was like," Yay kiseung! "
But well, Jun & Seobie is kind of pitiful D:
But too bad, cos' Seungie's still my bias so you'll deserve it for hurting him!
I feel so effing evil. :x
Okay I shall shut up now, super duper lots of love. <3333
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Haha, I could tell. :X
I felt evil for making three out of four people sad. D:
And I just like torturing Junnie so yessss, no relationships for him. >3
D: I feel so evil again.
♥♥♥
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It just makes me love you more Hun!
Hees, I'm evil too,
I really think he doesn't deserve a relationship yet while Kiseung will be causing lots of fluff around the whole house . ;D
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/ i read almost all of the fanfics but ive recently started on commenting.
cant wait the next one!
<3
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I'm not sure whether there's a next part to this or not, but we'll see. XD
Thanks for commenting!♥
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BRB reading
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reading all these Kiseung makes me a little angry too. they're cute but te lack of my otp these days irritates me.
He tried to lie to himself, pretending that he was okay with their sweet scenes. His head says "Who cares?" but he knew it himself, that his brittle heart whispered "You do, stupid".
But jealous Junhyung satisfies me.
Can't wait for the next part.
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Glad that you like this!
But I think this is the end. :O If I continue it, it might be ruined. XD
Meanwhile, I'll find more plot bunnies to write more Junseung.♥
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kiseung for me is always one-sided. and dooseung's always... someone has to let go or smth. haha idk. and i feel that too. i think angst works well for these two.
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