Shattered souls and never-ending tears

Sep 07, 2010 16:32

Title: Shattered souls and never-ending tears
Pairing: Broken!Junseung, Kiseung, Broken!Junseob
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Junhyung is jealous that Hyunseung had gotten together with Kikwang, and he ponders on his own relationship. It takes one mistake, to ruin everything.
Author Notes: Dedicated to cindyxmc for giving me the inspiration and the idea to ( Read more... )

band: beast, pairing: junhyung/yoseob, pairing: kikwang/hyunseung, pairing: junhyung/hyunseung

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 08:36:16 UTC
SPOT FOR cindyxmc because you totally deserved it!♥

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cindyxmc September 7 2010, 10:26:04 UTC
AKSDJKLAF;AJDJKLJSKDL
i was seriously going to curse yoseob out when he went hug junhyung
but since he broke up with him and all that serious talk and stuff, i'll let him go. haha

but omg kwangie! he punched the wall o.O
he made me afraid of him for a little, haha.
but i still love my ball of sunshine and luscious lips. <33
and when he totally called hyunseung Bambi! haha
i can totally imagine his whining voice "BUT BAMBI~~~" LOL

AND WTHECK, why am i feeling sorry for junhyung now? =/
only a little though, he totally deserved that slap and so much more.

i...i...um...have another plot bunny, wtf =X
kiki totally beating the crap out of junhyung! haha nah, i'm just kidding.
i'm really really satisfied with this ending.
can't possibly write something else. haha love it too much to add more drama.
XDDDD

ahhhhhh, I LOVE YOU<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
thank you for saving me a spot!
i feel so special, keke ^^

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 10:30:18 UTC
Haha, poor Yoseob though. He love that bad-ass rapper. XD

In my perverted mind, Kiki is the type that is like a fluffball, with a dark side creepy enough to scare the life out of anybody.
:O I can totally imagine that too! XD

LOL. XD
Glad that you like it!♥

You're welcome! You totally deserved a spot!

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 08:36:46 UTC
SPOT FOR xanderleach cause you're so freaking AWESOME.♥

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xanderleach September 7 2010, 22:07:40 UTC
<3 Aw thanks for the spot! *slaps self for not getting to this earlier* *dumb school and work....*

Now where to freakin begin?! THIS made me cry again. Gah and not cause of Junhyung but because he's playing around with Hyunseung. I felt like screaming "Geesh you effed up your chances with him Jun! Leave him alone now!"

And Kiki, BOY DO i wanna see his DARK SIDE muahaha!!! *perverted much..*
He should've punched Junnie when he had the chance...MAN so much hate towards him..i feel terrible. I still love him hehe<3333 but not here T___T poor Yoseobie *sobs* great JunJun, you messing with two hearts. Kiki SHOULD punch you. >:|

OMO, what, this is the end? But But But But..things need to get settled :( no matter how much jun is a nuisance here...i can't just see it end with him crying. WAHHHHHHHH. I LOVED IT ANYHOW<33333

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sachiko_mizuki September 8 2010, 01:53:56 UTC
You're welcome! You're so freaking awesome that you need a spot. And oh, I just realized, I've never add you as a friend. D:

Well, I seemed to like making Jun the bad guy all the damn times so haha. >:3
Oh-ho? Kiki, wonderful wonderful ball of fluff that could kill you with his cuteness. Or his evil side. ;D
I know right? Kiki would totally punch him. One for messing with his lover, two for messing with his best friend. D:<

D: But but! Inspiration! I don't wanna fucked up the whole series by giving it a lousy ending. D: So yeah, I'll just leave it alone for the time being. :P

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xanderleach September 8 2010, 02:19:16 UTC
Dawww<3333 Oh? I shall add you right now! :3

It's okay cause bad guy Jun = WIN. >:3
Fluff or evilness, Kiki is smex on legs hohoho ;D
It's hard to imagine who will win tho. Cause Jun...is well...tough. And so is Kiki. But since Jun messed with both his lover and best friend...Jun is totally K.O-ed right there rofl!

Yes yes, we shall leave it at this ending. :) It's still superduperawesome either way :3

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 08:38:04 UTC
SPOT FOR muffledd You don't need a reason to be on my SPOTs list.♥

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muffledd September 7 2010, 16:50:38 UTC
Hehe ! I thought that I didn't have one~
Aww, you're so sweet.
Didn't online cos' I don't feel like it,
nah, just cos' I didn't on my com. {:

I love this man!
I was like," Yay kiseung! "
But well, Jun & Seobie is kind of pitiful D:
But too bad, cos' Seungie's still my bias so you'll deserve it for hurting him!
I feel so effing evil. :x
Okay I shall shut up now, super duper lots of love. <3333

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 17:56:01 UTC
You are forevar on my SPOT list, babeh. ;D
Haha, I could tell. :X

I felt evil for making three out of four people sad. D:
And I just like torturing Junnie so yessss, no relationships for him. >3
D: I feel so evil again.
♥♥♥

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muffledd September 7 2010, 21:24:41 UTC
Yay ! I have an ever lasting spot~
It just makes me love you more Hun!

Hees, I'm evil too,
I really think he doesn't deserve a relationship yet while Kiseung will be causing lots of fluff around the whole house . ;D

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aynhmzh September 7 2010, 09:19:25 UTC
my mind and heart is in pain right now >.<
/ i read almost all of the fanfics but ive recently started on commenting.
cant wait the next one!
<3

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 09:27:58 UTC
D: *patpat*
I'm not sure whether there's a next part to this or not, but we'll see. XD
Thanks for commenting!♥

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badoy September 7 2010, 10:04:17 UTC
I can't take this anymore. I thought the last part was the last. i can't even think right now. sflkjfglkjkf i've been reading to many broken fics

BRB reading

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badoy September 7 2010, 10:28:37 UTC
This is not what he had wanted. He was glad that Hyunseung managed to move on, but watching his ex-lover being all sweet and cuddling with Kikwang made him really angry somehow.

reading all these Kiseung makes me a little angry too. they're cute but te lack of my otp these days irritates me.

He tried to lie to himself, pretending that he was okay with their sweet scenes. His head says "Who cares?" but he knew it himself, that his brittle heart whispered "You do, stupid".

But jealous Junhyung satisfies me.

Can't wait for the next part.

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sachiko_mizuki September 7 2010, 10:32:50 UTC
XD Junseung is my OTP too, but Kiseung makes me giggle cause well. Kiseung=fluff. Junseung=angst. At least, to me. XD

Glad that you like this!
But I think this is the end. :O If I continue it, it might be ruined. XD
Meanwhile, I'll find more plot bunnies to write more Junseung.♥

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badoy September 8 2010, 16:29:59 UTC
oh i thought there will be a next part. ;~; now there's nothing. i've been complaining that there's too much angst and i need my fluff fix or at least something to balance. now i have nothing. i'm complaining again.
kiseung for me is always one-sided. and dooseung's always... someone has to let go or smth. haha idk. and i feel that too. i think angst works well for these two.

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