My first OP drabble :D

[sachmecik]

So here's my first One Piece drabble... and also my first journal update XD

Title: Mornings
Word count: 309
Rating: PG I think...
Parring: slight ZoSan
Disclaimer: One Piece belongs to my god aka Oda-sensei :D

Nami remarked it some time ago. They were allways like that,fighting screaming and stuff. But they were also nakama, even if they didn't

Comments

[the_shy_wolf]

Very nice, I like the Nami POV and how she sees the relationship just starting to grow,

But like wendytigges said, try to break the drabble into paragraphs, it makes it a bit easer on the eyes. ^_^

[angelicmeroko]

It's a lot better for a first english things thank mine was xD

Kind of cute :] But as the others said, it would be good to break them into paragraphs ^^

[afterburn]

-melts-
First time at this? Well you did swimmingly! I like how they have their little alone time together during odd hours of the day. Very sweet~!