Bamboo Grotto

[sacred_prophet]

'sunlight falls like silk through bamboo branches, across somber stone, a babbling brook the only sound, not even a bird twitters, this solemn area, forgotten, has been the resting place of the sword for centuries, left here in this most secret of hiding places, littered with blossoms from the cherry tree, stained with the blood of fallen heros and

Comments

[poesravyn]

ooooh! nicely put. kinda reminds me of the description of the broken sword in LOTR. but i still like it... a dream-like mood that puts suspence that the sword will awaken from its place of restful peace. hmmmmmmm... yeah, i like that. :D

[sacred_prophet]

thanks, as always i appreciate the comment. you can critique my work also, if you would like to. {love}