another challenge

[sacredangle]

Unscramble the following paragraph

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..i know parts of this arent right, but come on its kind of poetic this way too!

[justkidding_nr]

I'm down at the beach with Ibalu for the rest of the week.
It's so relaxing, just watching the ocean-
makes me think of my memories
I would live my end simply
would do it here.
move on with the beach all day and I'll be that some thing
Living out my life-to the last days. I would wash the ocean

Re: ..i know parts of this arent right, but come on its kind of poetic this way too!

[fdmts]

I'm at the beach with for the rest of the week watching the ocean. I just do Ibalu all day. It's so relaxing.

Think I'll wash down my beach memories and simply end my days. Living out my life makes me the last thing here.

Would it be the ocean that would live on?

I move: "of the to the with"

Re: ..i know parts of this arent right, but come on its kind of poetic this way too!

[sacredangle]

Close, but not as close as justkidding_nr
I like the first part though.

Re: ..i know parts of this arent right, but come on its kind of poetic this way too!

[sacredangle]

Pretty close, you've got the basic idea if not the exact sentances. The first sentance is right. And you're right, it's a little more poetic this way...