[[ SHINee ]] Parallel Lines 4/7.

[sacryde_riots]

Title: Parallel Lines.
Author: sacryde_riots.
Fandom: SHINee.
Pairing: Onew/Minho, with a side of Jonghyun/Taemin.
Rating: PG-15.
Summary: Trust Minho to get himself sent to a parallel universe the one day he has the dorm all to himself.
Status/length: Incomplete, 2,600 words.
Author's Note: This fic is kind of AU and kind of not. Dedicated to my

Comments

[fluffyxcloud]

holy cow! This is fabulous, Minho let it slip KEKEKEKEKE!!!!!!

They're relationship is so unbearably cute, I read this whole chapter with a grin on my face because it just made me so happy!

men are so dense, aren't they? ^.^ It's obvious that Jinki is already in love with Minho. ehehe, I did have a good chuckle when he fell looking at minho's mouth AHAH, that is so something he would do. anyhoo...GREAT CHAPTER seeing you update always makes my day! Can't WAIT to read the next part. 6 or 7 chapters sounds fabulous!!!

[sacryde_riots]

kjhadgkjhsdgkjshdg thank you!!!!!! :DDDDD

Ahhhh I'm glad!! I was trying so hard to make their relationship cute but still believable so jkjahdgkjhsdg I'm happy that it made you happy! xDD

Kekeke, well Jinki may be smart, but he's not really good at noticing obvious things. XDDD THANK YOU SO MUCH!! Your comments always make me happy. <33333333333333333

[xxqod]

ne~ spot.

[xxqod]

lmao. mic-hogging Jonghyun XDDDDDDDD

Jinki fits perfectly, I love Taemin and Kibum&Jonghyun is just too funny for words XD
They like him alright!

Oh, nice one Minho! Actually giving Kibum nothing to say XD

I love it how Jinki and Minho grow closer ^^ It's really so nice to read :D

Jinki sangtaeeee <3

Uh-oh. Did Minho just give himself away in a moment of unawareness? XD
Must be good to feel free once, if he doesn't do when being an idol...

<3 ~~

[sacryde_riots]

i always picture jonghyun as a mic-hog XDDDD

ahhhhhhhh of course they like him!!! they just don't know why XDD

yeah he did! lol darn jinki and his ability to make anyone laugh XD
i know, right? i kind of want to keep minho in this world because he doesn't have to go through all that stupid stuff he has to go through as an idol D:

thank you for you comment!!! <3~~~

[miss_circle]

OMG!! WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME HANGING THERE?? GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON OR ELSE!!!!

Why 6-7 chapters?? You can write 20 chapters and I won't mind! 8DDDDD

[sacryde_riots]

BECAUSE I LOVE CLIFFHANGERS AND IT WAS GETTING WAYYYYY TOO LONG. XDDDD I PROMISE TO UPDATE SOON! :DDDD

Because~~~ I have a short attention span and idk how long I could draw it out. XDD I might make it closer to 10 chapters though if enough people want it longer. XDD

Thank you for commenting!!! kjahdgkjhsdgkjhsdg. :DDDDDDDD ♥

[ex_argh]

spot^^;;

[sacryde_riots]

YOUR ICONS ARE GOING TO KILL ME.

[ex_argh]

8DD *giggles* my icons are going to kill you? D: eeeeeks nooo if you die you can't finish this fic :/ so no dying~ :D ♥

AH THIS CHAPTER WAS SO DAMN CUTE~ djkfhsdkjfhdskf *dies* your Jinki is so cute and Minho -_-; don't be so stupid!!! Of course Jinki can fall in love with you~ ♥ :D

I loved this line:
"Y-you mean. You want me. To go with you. To karaoke?"

YES JINKI MINHO WANTS YOU 8D (sorry hahaha couldn't help myself ;D) fhsdjkfsdkf

ugh this is just so cute~ ^^ I think you should make it as many chapters as fits? If that makes sense? D:

Oh and I spotted these:
"I don't think your friends like me very much," Jinki whispered, practically clinging to Minho's arm as they left the karoke booth to get a round of drinks.
^ karaoke XD

"Yeah, but you were all serious about it," Jinki frowned, waving his hand in front of Minho's face. Minho looked up, only to burst out laughing at the dead serious expression on Jinki's face in what he knew was supposed to be an immitation of his own

[sacryde_riots]

GODDAMNIT THE DUBULGE IS MY WEAKNESS. /flails around

AHHHH I'M GLAD YOU THINK SO!!! XDDDDD I'm so glad you think my Jinki is cute, I was paranoid about whether or not he would be believable. XDD Minho is an idiot, I say! He'll get what's coming to him~

LMFAO OH GOD I DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE THAT XDDDDDDDDD

Yeah that makes sense~ stretch it out as long as possible without giving up quality, yes? :'DDDDD I will do that, BB. ^^

Ahhhh, thank you! *pulls you out of hiding* I hate making spelling mistakes because I'm usually very good at spelling, so pointing out mistakes is lkjdshgkjshdg thank you. ^^

I'm glad~ :DDD Thank you!!!! ♥

[eukyungkyung]

omg! what's gonna happen? what's gonna happen? WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NXT?
u left me hanging right there
:D

[sacryde_riots]

YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON!! XDDD
sorry for leaving you hanging D:
thank you for commenting, too!!!! <3