Looking good. Only crit I have is to use caps only for the text in your speech bubbles. I know it might not seem that important and it might even go against everything you know about grammar and 'netiquette' but trust me, it looks a lot better visually and all professional comics/webcomics and manga does it as well so it looks a lot more natural to the reader.
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Love it!
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