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Prompted 2: Bloody Sunset.
Feb 26, 2010 18:16
With thanks to
misscatlady
for the prompt.
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Bloody Sunset
)
everett
,
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misscatlady
February 27 2010, 14:03:30 UTC
That was awesome.
Not so much Everett getting shot, but the writing. <3 You're so great.
I like that you capture so much in this small snippet of writing, as well. Instead of droning on and on. I wish I could say more with less.
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sadisticerrorpi
February 27 2010, 22:59:13 UTC
Thank you for the compliment.
You CAN say more with less. Make yourself do it in 500 words. Cut all the fat. Remove your favorite lines and save them for another project. You totally can do it!!!!
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Not so much Everett getting shot, but the writing. <3 You're so great.
I like that you capture so much in this small snippet of writing, as well. Instead of droning on and on. I wish I could say more with less.
Reply
You CAN say more with less. Make yourself do it in 500 words. Cut all the fat. Remove your favorite lines and save them for another project. You totally can do it!!!!
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