Late nights; I should do useful things

Mar 23, 2011 23:18

There's something so sad about stacked spoons
And the grease-marked ages on the windows
Lonely missives directed to 'the occupant' 
A painful apathy in how I can tell
Who's coming up the stairs

Those month-old stains have stayed a year
Appear, loiter, disappear...
It's the gas oven, warmer than some nameless chest
That makes me realise
I thought I found a ( Read more... )

utter garbage, poetry, it's been a while

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ruthlessangel March 23 2011, 23:37:50 UTC
This makes me want to cry.

I thought I found a home, but it was just another room
I totally get this... :/ *hugs forever*

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sadnessofrain March 24 2011, 16:54:47 UTC
Aww, thank you :') *hugs back* (forever)

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bendmyfire March 24 2011, 04:00:24 UTC
Your poetry has such a quality to it...I don't know how to explain. Brilliant...I hope you feel better soon. (:

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sadnessofrain March 24 2011, 16:56:36 UTC
Thank you :) I'm feeling better already, actually! Writing tends to have that effect on me. You know, expelling emotions and... stuff...

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bluelipgreeneye March 24 2011, 15:12:45 UTC
This makes me think of sepia, lonely nights and broken promises.

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sadnessofrain March 24 2011, 16:57:03 UTC
My intention; particularly the last two.

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