Fic: here come the blue skies (Castle/Beckett)

[sadpie]

Title: here come the blue skies
Fandom: Castle
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character: Castle/Beckett
Spoilers: All episodes through the season 4 finale.
Summary: Just another morning after fic. I actually haven't read too many so I'm hoping this isn't a total cliche. 
Kate is suddenly painfully aware of her low-rise lace underwear and stiff nipples

Comments

[xdawnfirex]

Oh, that's hilarious. I can totally see it; Beckett standing there SUPER uncomfortable in just her underwear and Martha going on and on. :D

Two minor quibbles: You note that Castle is lying there storing softly; I think you mean snoring. And in the first line, you mention "feverous" intensity, but the word you're looking for is feverish.

Otherwise, perfect and hilarious. :)

[sadpie]

Thank you for catching those, haha! I probably should have done a bit more proofreading.
And thanks for reading!

[mollywheezy]

I really enjoyed this. All of your characterizations rang true. Martha was hilarious! Great job! :D

[sadpie]

Thanks! :D

[sunshine_minx]

Oh, yeah. Can definitely see it, the whole thing. And Beckett just biting her lip, "Hi." That was perfection, because it was totally Beckett. Lovely job.

[sadpie]

Thank you!

[englishstrawbie]

I loved this whole scenario. I can definitely imagine Castle and Beckett being caught out by Martha like that!

“And yes, I am including the time she showed up at my junior high school and decided to stage an impromptu show about her experiences in giving birth to me. She, of course, played all the roles.” << this line literally made me lol.

[sadpie]

Thank you! Yeah, ever since the finale I had really wanted to write a fic where Beckett awkwardly bumbs into Martha the morning after, haha.

Thanks for reading :)