Besides a couple typographical errors, which may very well be because you were trying to beat the clock in typing this, it's really good. I'm presuming it's connected to your first story for Fiction?
O, and I know this is just part of something you want to do for a novel, but I do so hope that these characters get names eventually? Because otherwise, the pronoun use will probably become confusing, if not excessive. But like I said, this is just a blurb, and therefore names aren't necessarily essential.
Also, one little, actually rather insignificant thing, purely for my own curiosity: is the hacker male or female? Or is that answered by it's being the other controller, and therefore female?
I tried to explain it to him once, and I think the answer was no. He needs William Gibson too - Mona Lisa Overdrive and all that good stuff. I have a lot of it in the boxes.
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O, and I know this is just part of something you want to do for a novel, but I do so hope that these characters get names eventually? Because otherwise, the pronoun use will probably become confusing, if not excessive. But like I said, this is just a blurb, and therefore names aren't necessarily essential.
Also, one little, actually rather insignificant thing, purely for my own curiosity: is the hacker male or female? Or is that answered by it's being the other controller, and therefore female?
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Have you seen Bladerunner? Aeon Flux? If I say "cyberpunk" do you know what I mean?
Look it up. Do that. Have fun.
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