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mmouse15 September 6 2012, 03:51:30 UTC
Holy smokes, your ability to write fight scenes has gotten even better, that was AMAZING.

I'm all wound up now from tension and sitting on the edge of my seat in hopes that they'd make it out.

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saesama September 6 2012, 17:04:35 UTC
Aw, shucks, thanks. I've been reading some very cinematic books in the past few months :B

I have more saved up for when I'm out again, a few months from now. And after that, I should be back for darn near good. So, not quite back yet, but close.

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dracoqueen22 September 6 2012, 05:39:50 UTC
I. Have. No. Words.

But I'm going to try anyway. This was incredible. I dragged myself out of lurkdom because I felt this sort of writing deserved to be acknowledged! I read it with breathless anticipation and the way you incorporated each new character by the end was awe-inspiring.

Just wow. I loved it. Truly loved it.

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saesama September 6 2012, 16:57:02 UTC
Oh man, I caused a delurking? I'm honored. Thank you very kindly.

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playswithworms September 7 2012, 01:08:37 UTC
Sides and Sunny, I have this suspicion they were having far too much fun with all the dramatic screaming...
Never underestimate Ratchet, whoo hoo! Blaster, yay!!! What an awesome scene!!! *was totally caught up*
FIRST AID GETS ALL THE SNUGGLES NAO, YES?

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saesama September 12 2012, 01:51:36 UTC
Appropriate icon is appropriate :D

Almost all the snuggles. Gotta save some for Ratchet, too, amirite?

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femme4jack September 7 2012, 04:26:44 UTC
That was AMAZING! Holy smokes, what a fight scene! *cheers for spec ops team and Blaster and Ratchet and EVERYONE!!!* How will I ever be able to sleep now? This was just too exciting!

I'm with PWW - First Aid needs so many snuggles now. Thank you for making him so awesome.

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saesama September 12 2012, 02:02:11 UTC
I'd nearly forgotten how fun fight scenes are to write :D

He gets many snugglies. And I now have a permanent First Aid muse.

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tainry September 10 2012, 09:09:41 UTC
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Hound! Mirage! Blue! Blaster!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!! Poor Ratchet, but going down fighting hot damn! And all the awfulness yes poor Aid will need SO MANY HUGS!!! But EEEEEEE SO HAPPY at the end! The cavalry!!!!!
<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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saesama September 12 2012, 01:57:55 UTC
Bluestreak: you know, you gave me this backstory and all, but you've never put me in anything else, and, you know, I really think I could be useful, don't you think? I mean, I could do rescue, or assassinations, ooooor HOW ABOUT I HIJACK YOUR CURRENT FIC HI GUYS HOW ARE YOU DOING I BROUGHT FRIENDS.

And that's how the spec ops team ended up in this :B

Even nearly dead, the Hatchet aint going down without a fight.

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