Beast - Chapter 2

[saetha]

Chapter 2

Series: Gintama
Characters: (Jouishishi) Takasugi, Gintoki, Katsura, Sakamoto
Rating: T
Length: 4,556 words
Summary: A slow recovery, some talk about the last battle, the Kiheitai and war strategies in general.
Beta: tons of thanks to niente_denada again!
Warnings: angst, pain
Notes: So happy to finally have a Beta! It helps a lot.
Back to the present now.

Comments

[mercymelucretia]

So, now I'm in your journal, leaving you comments X)

I think I'll keep writing them in English, if that's okay. Well, first I have to say that I am pleased, I liked this chapter even more than the previous one. So, first of all kudos to you that you addressed the issue that people who have just one eye left see different and need time to learn to cope with that. Even actual writers who earn their money seem to have never heard of this.

Of course I also liked the interactions between the characters and the way you used them in this chapter. Gintoki and Zura were in charcter as far as I can tell and that's a good thing :)

The scenario you described was somewhat realistic, especially Zura's reactions, and I got even more hooked on this story. To be honest, the prolouge was not so impressing to me but your story improved:)

At the moment I can't think of somehting that I hated but it's late here ahahahaha

And now I laugh like Sakamoto. Great

[saetha]

Aw, thank you so much. I'm very happy you like this chapter (I think it's one of my favourites too). Well...the benefits of cosplaying, I daresay. I actually kept running into walls. And people.

Glad that you think that they were in character. It's the way I imagine them but I'm never quite sure other people see them like that too xD.

AHAHAHAHA (I will laugh with you) - wait till you read chapter 3. I have the feeling you won't like it, LOL.

[saetha]

Thank you so much <3
I'm so incredibly happy you like it~