Beast - Chapter 3

[saetha]

Chapter 3

Series: Gintama
Characters: (Jouishishi) Takasugi, Gintoki, Katsura, Sakamoto
Rating: T
Length: 2,943 words
Summary: The situation worsens.
Beta: thanks to

Comments

[mercymelucretia]

I sense some action in the next chapter... :)

Well, I don't know what you exactly meant by saying that the readers will be pissed off. Maybe because it could be considered filler or because Shoyou-sensei was revealed to not completely innocent?

Anyway, as already said this chapter seems a bit like filler to me, but one cannot avoid this. I even think you managed to do a good one, you captured the atmosphere of this war quite good.

The only thing that is bugging me is that you wrote "He let his eyes wander...". I suppose it was a little mistake, so it's okay ^^

All in all, good job :)

PS: You may think this is a short chapter but I think the length was appropriate.

[saetha]

Whoa, quick O.O

Thanks so much! Yeah, this chapter is pretty much filler. It was a bit more exciting before I decided to get rid of that one storyline. And you're right, it's a filler, haha (auf deutsch nenne ich die Dinger immer Brückenkapitel...).

Yeah, I figured there would be people who'd get quite angry at me for making Shoyou not completely innocent. Let's see...

Wohoooooo, thank you! I corrected it. I got quite good at catching the eye/eyes-thing when I write but occasionally, it still happens, grah.

Thank you so much <3

[mercymelucretia]

Maybe I should consider changing my name to Speedy Gonzales xD

Personally, I think your decision to not make Shoyou-sensei completely innocent, angelical and all that stuff offers a loooot of possibilties and by that I mean angst ;D

Don't worry about that eye/eyes-thing, I mean characters with only one eye aren't that common so things like that can happen easily.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

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