And this is why I rarely ever write...

Dec 10, 2007 22:00

I wrote drabble...not very good drabble, but it's drabble none the less, Featuring my OC and Ash, very heavily based on one of my favourite scenes from Enchanted. Really you don't have to read if you don't want to but it is rather fluffy and not full of smut, mainly because I suck at writing smut it's not really my thing. Actually I suck at writing ( Read more... )

drabble, so close, saft and ash

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taigne December 11 2007, 18:14:51 UTC
Aww, that's really sweet! It doesn't need smut that'd just spoil it! There's some good descriptions of the dancngin there, I could totally see what they were doing, and the dialogue's really good, they talk like real people do! I like that Saft did listen to Ash rather than keep running away, I think she can change if she can let him help her out a bit! If you do write any more, please post it!

I'm enjoying editing people's stories at the moment, helping out with commas and stuff, so if you'd like me help with anything like that I'd love too (hehe, I just wanna read it before everyone else!!)

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['Cause Saft kinda looks like Rose] saft December 12 2007, 00:17:56 UTC
Saft's my baby ya see...I mean she's technicaly like only 19 and she still feels very much like a young girl, she's confused by other people's ways...I guess I love writing her 'cause it's nice to see her grow, Though I much prefer sketching Saft because well she just comes so naturally to me, She's my favourite out of all my OC's even if she's like a very strange Mary-Sue...though technicaly she isn't I just happened to drag either characters I like or aspects of certain anime characters I liked and pulled them into my own universe.

I might write more in the future if I can get my brain around it, I 'm still really wanting to make it into a long running online manga or something.

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