Get the Heat Out

Aug 17, 2007 09:39



This is not a betad and fully worked out story, but I want your comment, feedback on it.

Titel: Get The Heat Out
Author: Saga Chriztine - sagas_stories
Read General Information!: Here
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: RPS
Characters: Universe of I can't stand this Emotional Violence
Warnings: None, what I can think of
Chapter/Part: ?? - It is a think I think about to use…
Series/Sequel: One in the Punk Series.
Disclaimer anything else: See General
Author's note for the whole series: Have you jumped over the information it is yourself that have to blame to be too lazy to learn the background to how this series is build.
If you leave a comment where you would complain of me to learn to spell or get a beta I would understand you didn't read everything… Would you anyway leave such comment YOU CAN GO F**** YOURSELF!
Author's note: I really consider to put this part in the story I can't stand this Emotional Violence, so Please if you take time to read it give me a little time and tell me what you think.



He knew that he had to get out. The thing was making him frustrated and he really felt he needed to get some of his sex drift out of his body.

The place he choice was close to the university. It would hold a lot of young people. From the other times he knew that it would be lot easier to find any to have fun with.

He sat at the bar, drinking vodka and looking over the people. It was mostly young people, who were there in groups or pair. Only a few seemed to be singles. During these periods he didn't care if he got a guy or a girl. It could easily be more than one during the evening. There were many he could think of but it had to be the right ones.

For some time he had been watching a group where a handsome looking guy draw his eyes to look at them. He had noticed him from the moment he had stepped into the place. The guy had light brown hair, white blending smile, but seemed to be the silent type. He didn't think the guy could be over twenty and he doubted that the guy were from the city.

The evening was too early to make a move, since he wanted the night to be long, so he satisfied to keep watching the people.

After another drink he got company at the bar by a woman. He let his eyes travel over her, she didn't look bad, though she wasn't the best looking woman he had seen either. He gave her one of his best smile and cheered with her when she had got her drink from the bartender. The minutes went and there where no one that came to meet her and he saw through the corner of his eye that she also took in the place. His conclusion was that she also was there to find anyone to have some fun with.

When both seemed to have the same thoughts he bought her next drink, as he continued on his. She accepted it and after some time she started to give him a lot of interest. The music in the place was loud and it wasn't easy to talk to each other, but that suited him perfectly. He wouldn't talked much as he preferred to let the others do the talking and he usual only nodded or shook his head to what they said.

Even if he flirted with her, he had kept his eyes on the young guy. When he saw that the guy went to the gents he excused himself for a moment and followed.



He fixed his clothes and went back to the woman at the bar. She sat waiting and had ordered them new drinks. She started to be bolder, stroking him on his tight, arms, treading her finger in his hair and he didn't reject her. He touched her as well. Finally he leaned forward and kissed her.

They continued to smoulder each other, and when their drinks was finished she took him out of there.

So if you taken time and read it come with all kind of feedback, questions, suggestions

type:au, character:orlando bloom, character:omc, verse!emotional, punk series

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