Because Tim Said so....

Apr 03, 2007 23:25

I saw on lackofenphorin's blog that it was poetry month. So here is my Hakui:

Alone, Emptiness
Our human motivations...
ME grasping for You

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myscrapbook_ April 18 2007, 20:52:31 UTC
I love your Haiku, but it's sad :*(

Here's mine...

-Path-
The moon rises now
Its splendid beauty holds true
It lights our way home

I wrote this for my students during student teaching when I taught my poetry unit and they loved it for some reason lol. They were like WOW Miss W. How long did that take you? I was like well...3 minutes lol.

Yours is very intense though, and far better than my cheesy one hehe.

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sagman April 19 2007, 00:40:23 UTC
I like your Haiku it is more like the tradional ones.

I like the patterns in Haikus.

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