"My Illusion"

Nov 06, 2006 19:56

Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam SEED Destiny.

Title: My Illusion
Character(s): Lunamaria
Rating: PG-13 to be safe. Some mild language here.
Genre: Angst. (At least I think it is...)
Word Count: 428

Summary: She tries to cope with the death of her sister. One-shot. A bit of OOC.

My Illusion )

gundam seed/destiny, fanfiction

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jdiam November 6 2006, 13:04:02 UTC
It's early and I have to leave soon so I can't read this yet. Just dropping a note to say that I will later though. :D

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sai_rin November 7 2006, 02:31:44 UTC
Ahaha, no problem ^_^ Thanks for taking the time to come by later though :D

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jdiam November 9 2006, 22:03:16 UTC
Aww, it's good. And sad. ;o; I wish they'd gone into it deeper in the series. Maybe for the SEs?

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sai_rin November 10 2006, 01:49:46 UTC
Thank you ^_^

Aha, yes. They might, though I don't pin much hope on it :S Luna isn't a very central character, so they probably wouldn't bother -_- Well there's still two more SEs to go, I think.

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carameltrap November 7 2006, 01:46:47 UTC
Really good. Wish I had thought of it but I didn't so glad that someone else did.

I like that you had her not blaming Shinn for Meyrin's 'death' because it seemed that she was struggling not to blame him for shooting that GOUF down.

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sai_rin November 7 2006, 02:36:46 UTC
Ah. Thanks for the compliment ^_^

I didn't think that she'd blame him. At first I did find it weird that she'd end up with Shinn, but after some thinking, it doesn't seem so confusing anymore :P Luna is an understanding person.

I just feel it's rather bizzare for her to blame LOGOS for the whole thing. So the conclusion I came to was that she was just finding something, anything, that would make her sister look less bad, so to speak (-_-)

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carameltrap November 7 2006, 09:45:04 UTC
Maybe she did but then she transferred the blame to someone else. I think she wanted to pin it on anyone other than Shinn.

You know what? I'd love it if you can write one of her blaming Athrun for 'turning' Meyrin. ^^

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sai_rin November 7 2006, 12:19:51 UTC
Mm. Yeah. A lot of possibilities.

But if it were me in her shoes, I'd have turned my back on him and blame him for it. And I'd make him feel guilty at every point that I could. I couldn't give a damn whether he had his orders, but that was my sister, dammit. Wahahaha.

I could try :P

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kiseki_emotion November 7 2006, 07:08:04 UTC
This was what you didn't want me to see?? It's not a bad fic. It's quite good. Keepitup!! ^^

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sai_rin November 7 2006, 08:26:54 UTC
LOL. You do the same to me when you're about to post a fic, no?

Ahahaha, thanks XD

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