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[saicareen]

CHAPTER 1....

“Oi, Kame stop being so slow! Move faster will you?”

Jin shouted. “Gomen ne, I just forgot something” kame explained as he runs toward his friends way. “So where are we going today buddy?” kame asked as he put an arm on his friend’s shoulder. “It’s up to you” Jin answered in a low voice.

Jin was not being himself today, Kame

Comments

[chrisrenheb]

Very good for a first time.
I would love to see what happens now.
Thanks for sharing.

[saicareen]

thank you...
well, let's see what will i write next cause i don't have any idea right now!!
:D

[robileczuya]

god, i want to kill megumi. fvck her.

[saicareen]

her part in the story is very irritating..
thank you for reading..

[kame_kiyumi]

has a sequel? =) its good~
but i dun really like jin here......... *angry*

[saicareen]

i'm really not sure..
but i'll continue it during my free time..
thank you:D.. Jin plays a bad friend image here

[mizuno_hikaru]

gosh, i need moaaarrrr.
what happen to them after that??
i was thinking about killing megumi rite now... XDXD

[saicareen]

i'll try to write as soon as i can..
megumi's irritating in the story..
thank you for liking it!! :D

[kirei_shinigami]

i hate megumi!!!
i mean, who the hell is she to order jin around?!
nobody hurts my kame...

[saicareen]

yeah.. i agree...
thank you for reading