The Locked Room

[boblemon]

Title: The Locked Room
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sho/Nino
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Sho has come to rely on Nino for help in solving a series of difficult cases involving locked rooms, but this time everything is becoming too personal to be comfortable.
Notes: Thanks to r_tenou for putting me back on track on

Comments

[coolohoh]

omg so lovely! Juntoshi pair! sugoi!!!!

[boblemon]

Haha, yeah, Juntoshi showed up there at the end. >_< Thanks for reading!

[amnos13]

congratulation :) this fic is so interesting :) love sakumiya

[boblemon]

Thank you!

[br_arashi]

You'ré not good?
But this was amazing!!!
Very thrilling till the end!
Loved the mix sooooo much!

[boblemon]

Thank you for your nice comment! :D I'm really glad to hear that you liked it! It gave me a really hard time writing it.

[yukichan_tb]

What a.... HUGE work! :O
This is the very first thing I thought while reading this fic :-)
You created a whole group of characters in an alternative universe and you even managed to create a full story in a one-shot..... I think this is why you find contests more difficult than posting regularly on your blog XD

Anyway, this is absolutely well written, even though it might have been easier to read if it were cut into different chapters (each one with a cliffhanger or something like that) but again, you can't write multichap for a contest so...... You did a great work here! :D

^____^

BTW: it's so nice for me reading again your works after having been on hiatus for a long time! :-P

[boblemon]

Huge. xD Thank you? Yes, it's huge in a lot of ways, which is probably why I felt like I didn't put enough time into it. Although the characters and universe wasn't hard, since it's based off of the previous series. Thanks for your comment, I really think you're right about it, and that will help me when I think about the next contest. :)

It's nice to see you again too! :D Congrats on being married and your honeymoon~

[yukichan_tb]

*yukichan loves analyzing things.*
XD

I hope you aren't disappointed with my comment as I may have been too critic, but it would be nice if it really helps you on your next challenge ^^
and thank you for your wishes! Tee hee~ :-)

[boblemon]

No, those are comments I like! I like to know concrete reasons for things I'm dissatisfied with so that I can correct them in the future! I already know I can't be concise about things, and that's probably one reason why, I get too far into the universe and character relationships. So thank you!