What's Under the Skirt is a Secret

[boblemon]

Title: What’s Under the Skirt is a Secret
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sho/Ohno (Satoko)
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Sho’s not sure if Satoko is actually a girl or not, but either way he wants to make her his.
Notes: For the yama "Proposal" contest at murasakinoyume. Title taken from a doujinshi.

Comments

[zukkoke_iero]

I voted for this!!!
Didn't think it's yours!
Ohh!! I really am interested to read how the original is ended! Aren't you going to write another version of this? XDD
Thanks so much for writing Satoko fic! Always looooves it ♥

[boblemon]

Thank you! The contest was hard to vote for since all of the entries were good!

Well, the original story was different from this, so it would be a completely different story altogether. XD I might write it, but we'll have to see, haha. Still have a lot on my plate. >_<

But I will write Satoko again!! I promise!!

[zukkoke_iero]

good luck! and yaaay!!! more satoko ♥

ehehe, when i read this the first time, I really thought that Juntoshi is really possible to get more screen time XDD now it makes sense that you mentioned it was supposed to be a JunxSatokoxSho fic~

[boblemon]

Well, in the original story Satoko was working at Nino's coffee shop and Sho and Jun were competing for her attention. I started writing it as yama, but I couldn't give up Juntoshi. XD So I couldn't write it in the end. OTL

[shinigamiami]

Ah, it's too bad about the Jun/Satoko/Sho idea... I would've totally enjoyed that XD But either way, yay~ Satoko fic~ And Jun being all b*tchy while looking fabulous ;) I got some jealousy vibes from Jun though...

[boblemon]

Well, maybe I'll find the motivation and time to write the other story. I'm sorry!

Jun was just over protective, lol! Trying to protect poor Ohno from the pervy Sho-kuns. XD

Thanks for reading!

[shinigamiami]

Haha it's okay!

"Pervy Sho-kuns" xD That's actually sort of hard to imagine...

Thanks for writing!

[boblemon]

Pervy Sho-kun is hard to imagine? XDXD Not for me, lol.

[nekobot01]

I don't usually like Yama but WOW! You really captured something good here. ♥

Your build-ups are the best... I liked this a lot. :)))

[boblemon]

I'm glad you liked it~! :D I need to do more Satoko stories, yes? Glad there was a build-up here because I was feeling like the plot was a little flat. \:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[nekobot01]

More Satoko. *nods* YES! I'm in love with Satoko. ♥

And I really liked the pacing!! The switch in perspectives really gave it a kick. Far from flat IHMO. :)

[boblemon]

Me too! Although a little hard to pin down in my head. >_>

Okay, good! Thank you for the feedback! I felt like the perspective switch was too sudden, but maybe that was a good thing!

[helenmaldon]

KYAAAAAAAAAA I wish I hadn't waited so long to read this!! This is WONDERFUL!!!!! I love Satoko, and I love just how you describe her: "Sho still can’t tell whether Satoko is a girl that’s just too relaxed to care about propriety, or a man who doesn’t care about properly keeping up his facade as a girl." That is the best : ) And Sho is sooooo wonderful in this too :D :D :D
This is so sexy and delightful, thank you for sharing ^^

[boblemon]

Thanks for reading and glad it was enjoyable! As I said in the AN, I feel like this could have been an entire series, haha. Satoko and cross dressing Jun for a long time. XD But I'm glad it was okay, and it didn't take me forever to write, so there's that. ^__^

[laoracci]

I don't usually read yama with satoko in it, but this one is really good >//v//<
I really enjoyed it. love it so much <3
thank you :D

[boblemon]

Thank you for reading and your comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!